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Chapter #5

Asoalur rises.

    by: seawolf147 Author IconMail Icon
Asoalur moved between the trees, stopping every so often to lean against a trunk. The moon was shining just enough light to see the next tree ahead but not much father than that, Asoalur stop again to cough up more blood. Since he had risen, a few hour ago, he'd come across three humans, the first he'd quickly possessed, that had been a huge mistake. She was an old haggard prostitute, her corrupt soul had barely clung on to her bones and now with his soul inside, her body was burning fast. He'd found her walking along the dark main road, but with her body in the state it was he was never going to make the thirteen mile back into town, so he'd turned into the forest and started heading towards the lake. The other two humans he'd came upon on his moon lit walk, one was a female cop but she drove past before Asoalur could catch her attention in the dark wood, the other human had been a hunter, armed to the teeth, Asoalur had decided to give him a wide berth.

Asoalur tried to take another step but the body he was wearing gave out, he collapsed. He rested his back on a fallen tree and cough more blood up, he could feel that this time the blood contained large bits. He tried to move his legs but they wouldn't respond, he slowly resigned him self to dying out in the woods and having to go back to hell empty handed. Hell, he though angrily to himself, he'd left it to later to harvest the prostitutes soul, the only thing he was strong enough to do to her soul was to wave the buzzing ball that was the woman's soul away from his head. The soul quickly came back and tried to force it's way back into its body but he fought it off, if a demon doesn't consume the soul of the person he has possessed they normally past on to the other side but this woman had got a glimpse of what a life time of sin had bought her in hell and decided to fight him. Asoalur waved it away again, he was going to be the laughing stock of hell, the first low-life demon to crawl out of hell unaided but was then to weak to do anything more than stumble around in some dark woods. He should have just done what all the other demon of his level do to get out of hell, suck up to a higher level demon and hope that when their master breaks out of hell they can hold on to their coattails. "Oh would you go to hell already!" Asoalur shouted at the annoying soul again trying to fight its way back inside its dying body.

"Pardon?" a feminine voice called from the dark, a few seconds later a light shined round the corner of the upturned roots of the fallen tree. The light fell on Asoalur and he heard a female gasp, a woman ran up to him and kneeled next to his bloody body. He slowly turn his head to look at his savour, if he had the energy he would have laughed, it was a nun, a bloody, bloody nun. He could feel her innocent soul opening up to him in pity, she was perfect for him every way, she was kind of heart, weak of mind, pure of soul and the best bit she'd give him access to even more people. He'd never felt a soul as weak as hers, considering his condition he almost thanked god for this miracle. The woman babbled on about what happened and getting help but Asoalur knew he was fading fast so he needed to act even faster.

Asoalur tried speaking but nothing but blood came out of his mouth, the nun leaned in trying to hear this words. With the last of this strength he grabbed the nuns head and forced their mouths together, gallons of black liquid came pouring out of the whores cock sucking mouth and down the nuns pious throat. The nuns body shook as Asoalur consumed her soul, the more he ate the strong he got, so the more he ate, till there was nothing left, the nun was now a part of him forever. Asoalur fell back on to the grass enjoying the feel of possessing a body that was pure, that could not only support his soul but help him get even more powerful. From the moonlight he'd been able to tell that she was only a 4/10 but once he built up his strength he'd be able to change that.

A load of coughing made Asoalur look up, the whore had climbed back into her body. "You're going to be dead in a few minutes, and then off to hell with you, but maybe I could help you, stop you from going to hell" he crawled over to her, being careful not to get blood on your habit "would you like that?" Asoalur heard a barely audible yes. Asoalur pushed his hand into the woman chest and pulled out her soul, it was black and covered in a tar like substance he whispered a few ancient words and shove the soul but into the body. The whore coughed a few time more but soon recovered, without any scaring from the Asoalur reaching into her. Asoalur stood and ordered the whore to stand also "from now on you are my slave, you can't resist any of my orders. I'm going to head up to the monastery and you're going to stay in the forest. You're going to live off the land what ever you eat will imbue you with some of it's talents, but no eating of humans. You're going to let people come and go as they please unless the people looks scared of is running away then I want you to catcher them and wait for me". Without waiting for a response Asoalur picked up the mushrooms the nun had been picking and headed for the monastery.

"Mary what are you doing hanging around outside? Come on in, we're later for midnight prayer" even with Asoalur's new strength he had not been able to cross the threshold of the monastery that was until he was invited in. Asoalur could feel that there were a number of places he still wouldn't be able to access but he could also sense that there were plenty soul that he could corrupt, starting with the girl in front of him.
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