I'm reviewing this item as part of "a very Wodehouse challenge" .
I chose this piece to review because I love poetry. The title and image piqued my curiosity, so I had to read more. This is a fantastic poem! I like the playful mood as you describe the house. It starts off by seeming a little creepy, but you quickly squash those thoughts with how you daydream of turning it around. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. It all flows extremely well. It is a smooth read from stanza to stanza. I didn't notice any punctuation or grammar issues. The fifth line is my favorite. It helps me see the picture you're painting. Overall, you've created a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work!