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Best Friends Open in new Window. [E]
Warnings had become standard fare for Mercy's dog Spike.
by bobaturn Author Icon
Review of Best Friends  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
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PLOT -Cute story about man's best friend. Mike hasn't spent enough time with his dog, Spike. Spike rummages through the garbage as a means to get attention from his owner. Even Mike's wife comments that he should be sticking to their routine and take the dog outside.




CHARACTERS -Mike, Mary and Spike.


GRAMMAR/SPELLING/DIALOGUE -I didn't find an issues in this short piece.

The dialogue was believable. Mary was quick to point out the issue with the situation while cleaning up after breakfast.


THOUGHTS -I enjoyed the ending where we get to see Spike's point of view and how he feels about Mike. Mike thinks he's the one doing the teaching, but it turns out that Spike is giving him a lesson as well. I did find it funny that Spike turned up his nose at the scraps from breakfast. Cute story.


Lost in a haze of purple she stands alone

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