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Est. January 4, 2012
I have been writing ever since I could hold a pencil. This is my first attempt at a manuscript for publication.I submitted my manuscript last year, and was told I needed to rewrite the beginning with a stronger hook. I recently completed the rewrite and was told I needed to join a critique group, and that my hook still wasn't strong enough, so here I am. Please help.

Absence of Truth- Chapter 1  [13+]   593 KB
FBI vs. Contemporary crime boss