Dude this is so cool. It's past my bedtime so I only vaguely can process what I'm reading but I LOVE this! I'll come back and add another review tomorrow when I'm more coherent but I want to make sure I say something in case I forget! I love the imagery I could FEEL THE PAINT ON ME! it was awesome. This is an experience to read and I looove it >_<!
AHHH I love this! You should (if you haven't) make a series about each sense being unreliable in it's own way. This poem leads me to believe either we just aren't capable of perceiving the truth properly, rendering our senses unhelpful in the world we have created that is secondary to the survival they were made for, or that we need all of them together to properly understand the society we have created.
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