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Rated: E · Fiction · Horror/Scary · #2350000

A vampire tries to drink the blood of his daughter

**The Night Visitor**

The moon hung low, casting an ominous glow over the small, creaking house. Inside, Jonathan paced his dimly lit living room, his heart thrumming with a rhythm as unsettling as the wind howling outside. His daughter, Emily, had claimed to hear strange noises in the night—soft footsteps that seemed to glide across the floorboards, shadows that danced just beyond the periphery of her vision. She called it a monster, but Jonathan dismissed her fears as mere childish fantasies. Until now.

A cold shiver crawled down his spine as he recalled the pale figure peering in through the window last night, its eyes gleaming with an unnatural hunger. It had vanished before he could approach, leaving only an unshakeable dread lingering in the air. The thought of a vampire prowling his home, thirsting for his daughter’s blood, felt like something torn from a nightmare. But Jonathan had always been a man of reason, trusting logic over superstition—until now.

The clock struck midnight, its chime echoing through the silence and amplifying his fear. He glanced at the staircase leading to Emily's room, her gentle snores barely audible beneath the oppressive quiet. In that moment, he felt a need to protect her more fiercely than ever—a father’s instinct ignited by paranoia.

He rummaged through the dusty closet, fingers trembling as they brushed against old tools and forgotten relics. Finally, he found what he was looking for: a sturdy wooden stake, one that had belonged to his grandfather, who once regaled tales of evil lurking in the dark. Jonathan’s grip tightened around the cool wood as he took a deep breath, steeling himself for what he might have to do.

Sudden movement from outside caught his attention—a shadow flitted past the window, followed by a soft tap at the door. His heart plummeted. Was it just the wind? Or was it the creature he dreaded? Cautiously, he made his way to the front door, every creak of the floorboards sounding like thunder in the stillness.

“Who’s there?” he called out, forcing his voice to steady despite the rising fear in his chest. Silence enveloped him, thick and suffocating. He reached for the door handle, hesitating just a moment longer, then swung the door open with a crash. Night air rushed in, chilling him to the bone. No one was out there.

Jonathan stepped back, closing the door quickly, but a flicker of movement caught his eye in the darkness. He turned, heart racing, bracing himself against the doorframe. A fleeting silhouette darted across the yard, and he instinctively knew it was the creature that threatened his daughter.

He sprinted toward the staircase, urgency driving him up the steps. The hallway was darker than ever, shadows clutching at the edges of his vision. He reached Emily’s room and pushed the door open, dread pooling in his stomach when he found her bed empty. A million fears raced through his mind—had she been taken? Or worse, had she willingly gone outside?

“Emily!” he shouted, panic lacing his voice as he scanned the room, noticing the window ajar. The curtain billowed like some ghostly apparition, whispering secrets he didn’t want to hear. He rushed to the window, pushing it open wider.

The night sang with sinister sounds—the rustling of leaves, the distant hoot of an owl, and something else, a soft, almost seductive whisper that sent chills coursing through him. “Join me, little one,” it beckoned, smooth and enchanting. Jonathan felt bile rise in his throat.

Before he could think, he bolted down the stairs towards the yard, the stake grasped firmly in his right hand. Outside, the moon bathed the world in a silver hue, illuminating the scene before him with an eerie clarity. There stood Emily, entranced, gazing up at the creature that loomed over her. The vampire—pale, ethereal, with pinprick pupils that drank in her innocence—had her in its thrall.

“No!” he yelled, breaking the spell. Emily pivoted, confusion clouding her bright blue eyes, but the vampire turned slowly, revealing its sharp, glistening fangs.

“Leave her alone!” Jonathan screamed, charging forward, adrenaline pushing him closer to the monstrous figure. The vampire’s lips curled into a cruel smile, reveling in the feast it nearly had.

Just as Jonathan reached the fiend, it raised a hand, thin and graceful, as if to ward him off. “You’re too late,” it hissed, its voice dripping with venomous allure. “She is mine.”

“No!” he shouted again, swinging the stake with all the strength he could muster. The vampire sidestepped gracefully, its movements fluid and predatory. Jonathan stumbled, regaining his footing just in time to see Emily stagger back, blissfully unaware of the danger she had narrowly escaped.

“Emily, run!” he commanded, his voice strained from fear and effort. But she stood frozen, confused by the sudden chaos. Jonathan redirected his attention to the vampire, which was now circling him, an amused expression plastered on its pale face.

“Do you really think you can save her? You think you can thwart me?” it taunted, eyes glittering with menace. “She is so beautiful, so pure. Her blood will grant me power beyond your reckoning.”

“Get away from her!” Jonathan bellowed, desperation clawing at his insides as he saw Emily inching closer to the creature, entranced. He took several heavy breaths, centering himself for one final attempt.

With a sudden burst of courage, he lunged forward, aiming the stake directly at the heart of the beast. The vampire, startled, attempted to dodge, but Jonathan was quicker this time. He thrust the stake forward with all his might, feeling a strange sense of destiny guiding his actions.

The stake pierced through the vampire's chest with a sickening thud. For a heartbeat, time froze. The vampire’s expression morphed from amusement to horror as it stared down at the wooden shaft protruding from its body. A guttural, inhuman scream erupted from its lips, echoing through the night as the creature stumbled back, releasing its hold on Emily.

In that moment, she snapped out of her trance, eyes wide with realization. “Dad!” she gasped, finally comprehending the terror that engulfed their home.

As the vampire writhed and convulsed, a dreadful transformation began. Its skin cracked and charred, a dark mist curling away as if the very essence of darkness was being expelled. Emily’s eyes were drawn to the horror before them, her innocent curiosity morphing into sheer terror.

“Get inside!” Jonathan shouted, his heart racing as he kept his eyes on the writhing entity. He watched as the creature fell to the ground in a heap, its body disintegrating into ash that spiraled away on the wind.

He rushed to Emily, enveloping her in his arms, shielding her from the remnants of the horrifying encounter. “It’s okay, it’s over,” he whispered, even as his heart raced with the knowledge of how close he had come to losing her.

But long after the vampire had vanished, Jonathan understood that their lives would never be the same. The shadows of the night had tasted their fear, and somewhere, deep within the recesses of darkness, another creature would stir.
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