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| Hi, So yesterday evening when walking my dogs I was thinking about the story I'm writing. Something didn't feel right after I added the Chapter 2 draft. It felt as if the flow of the story was not clicking with me. The things that happen in it are fine but the way it is brought up is weird. So after some thinking I came to the conclusion that I will be changing the progression a little bit. Chapter 1 will become Chapter 2, for now. Chapter 2 will become Chapter 1. For those that have read it, I think you might understand what I am trying to do here. For those that haven't and will read it, I hope it makes sense :) The way you jump from 1 place to another didn't click for me and with the way the story would progress, a flashback of sorts would make way more sense. Because of this I might make some changes to what is now a flashback and might remove some stuff to make it shorter. But as with all changes, I will write about it here when I do ^_^ For now, I have switched the 2 chapters and will be writing down, physically, a general timeline for chapter 1. It will span a year in the life of the MC so I am looking at things that will happen in that time period. The Work in Progress is a draft, as I said in my previous post, and it was for me to write down the first idea of how it would go. Now it is time to put more ideas in and make it a nicely rounded year of life for the mc :) On another note. I also posted the link to my WDC profile on my Facebook page. Nerve wrecking for nothing but still I did it!. It's not like many of my Facebook contacts would really care about it XD But for now I will just be happily writing on on my story. No clue if anyone will eventually read the whole thing. No clue if my writing will improve. and No clue if the story in general will be any good at all. But writing on, I will o/ See you next entry |
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