personal journey

UPDATE: chapters edits

Hey folks.
I just altered the chapters a small bit to have a bit more visual information about the surroundings of the characters.
Additionally I also added some extra lines to make the mood of the scene a bit more clear including the relationship and some hints for the story.

It is not much but as I was translating the story to Dutch for my mother, who wanted to read it, I found some parts that lacked information :)

So if you want, check it out.

Otherwise I hope you enjoy the story.

Cheers