Rage of Envy Rewrite Project

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Adding to Kory Galloway's team.....

Sophie Tilman 39 5'5" 230lbs
red hair, pony tails, black streaks
Blue eyes glasses Heavy Makeup Introvert
Computer Analyst



Will Severs 42 6'1" 200lbs
Curly Brown Hair brown eyes goatee mustache
Tech expert

Changed Joe Marks to a weapons expert/ former SWAT

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Crime details

Severely beaten
Tongues cut out.
Bodies posed in sacrifice position arms out and slightly up feet apart
Sexually assaulted sodimized
stabbed several times with different knives
Throat slit with small sharp object like surgical knife.

Bodies dumped in various areas? Problem: what about the robberies?
Problem with them being attacked at home: where are the parents???

Taking and using atm cards/ credit cards

Should there be a gun involved?
How much time do they have with the victims?_____________________________________________________________________________________________

Waterton crimes are going to probably be told in flashbacks