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Started July 1st 2019 for contests, etc. as other blogs are filling up and have other purposes. I'm starting a new blog because
I'll be linking to
I've started an appendix (I no longer have one personally) to keep track of my Space Cadet journals for Space Blog. It's a work constantly under construction. Mind the mess.
I needed to start a folder for contests as there are so many deadlines and details to remember.
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For Day 2992: January 26, 2021 "Blogging Circle of Friends " Prompt: Winter Rain It slants from south to north warm enough to drip off the nose cold enough to encase the trees in ice it soaks the unwary to the bone then makes them shiver: inedible popsicles, human flavored, cold. The winters rains mix with glue-like sleet, a bane of the unexpectant South, worse than northern snow. For
"Invalid Item" [] by A Guest Visitor Mini-review: It could use an edit for grammar, punctuation and flow. It reads more like free verse; but, the couplet form detracts, as does the capitalization. In line 5 for instance "The swans" jars whereas "where swans" would not. Suggestion: take out all line breaks, punctuation and capitalization, then read it out loud paying attention to how it flows then add capitalization and punctuation and finally line breaks. The content is very good and it's definitely a keeper but the form detracts and annoys to such an extent I can only give it a 3.7 as is. It has potential for at least a 4.5. Write about this poem in your Blog entry today. I wish my dreams were caught. I send emails, messages, postcards... not sure that they make a difference. Maybe they do for someone ... not necessarily the intended recipient. Do I catch the dreams of others? I know that my nightmares process old traumas. Pleasant dreams would be preferable and welcome. 3.627 |