Thank you, Anni. Maybe I'm a masochist because I do like making things difficult for myself. I considered rhyming each line as well, but that was a bridge too far. Perhaps next time...
Smooth as butter melted,
rolling with the beat,
guitar picking at the edge,
keyboard’s nasal tones
swing in mainstream,
give way to guitar,
coarse of voice, strident,
reminds of green onions!
Line count: 8
Free verse
For Express It In Eight, 03.06.22
Prompt: Green Onions by Booker T and the MGs.
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