A simple music themed blog for Jeff’s "The Soundtrack of Your Life" challenge, and also to dump my thoughts about the 48 Hour Media Challenges when I don’t feel like creating a story or poem from the provided material. I may also add random poetry in here if I feel like it doesn’t qualify for a separate item.
I read your poem and am going to review it, but since it's an entry I can only comment.
* I like the imagery you use in this. It helps me imagine looking through that window seeing all the sounds, sights, and other senses.
* Plus the colored text matches the theme.
This is about as close to poetic form I can manage:
It's refreshing, like a glass of sweet iced tea on a warm Spring day. My ears, nose, eyes soak in its splendour.
You did a good job at the goal and requirements needed.
My own thoughts exactly! I'm not only surprised, but disappointed, at the choice of such a dubious drug theme for an 'official' public prompt on this usually tasteful and sensitive site.
So well said Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽!
1.
There once was a lady from Texas
Who ate Cheetos while driving her Lexus
Those orange stains
Are quite a bane
And leave all the cleaners per-plexus!
2.
There once was a fellow from Kent
Who gave up eating chocolate for Lent
His courage was strong
But didn't last long
When luscious fudge brownies were sent!
3.
There was an old lady from Finland
Who lived a great distance inland
But climate change
Made waters range
And now she's on very thin land!
4.
There was a tall fellow from Irvine
Who sat down underneath a pine
He said "whaddya know?
This goes to show
Sitting on needles can be fine!"
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