A simple music themed blog for Jeff’s "The Soundtrack of Your Life" challenge, and also to dump my thoughts about the 48 Hour Media Challenges when I don’t feel like creating a story or poem from the provided material. I may also add random poetry in here if I feel like it doesn’t qualify for a separate item.
I read your poem and am going to review it, but since it's an entry I can only comment.
* I like the imagery you use in this. It helps me imagine looking through that window seeing all the sounds, sights, and other senses.
* Plus the colored text matches the theme.
This is about as close to poetic form I can manage:
It's refreshing, like a glass of sweet iced tea on a warm Spring day. My ears, nose, eyes soak in its splendour.
You did a good job at the goal and requirements needed.
My own thoughts exactly! I'm not only surprised, but disappointed, at the choice of such a dubious drug theme for an 'official' public prompt on this usually tasteful and sensitive site.
So well said Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽!
I’d like to be a tapestry
Filled with vivid colors -
The light, the dark, the shades and tones,
Woven into a beautiful whole
That shares a message of hope
Like a security blanket
For anyone who needs it
I’d be a tapestry
Sitting on the loom
Never quite complete
With new colors and threads
Weft upon the horizon
Looming is a sunrise
Or is that a sunset?
Both are equally stunning
And we need balance to move forward
Weaving our story
In vivid colors
Upon the loom of life.
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