Thank you for that, Kiya - it's not many brave the wilds of my portfolio to discover my little 8-line poems, so it's wonderful to have some feedback on them. Much appreciated!
Wonderful poem that links footprints to bits and pieces of our memories over the years.
As we get older, we do leave a mark behind - footprints if you will - and even as they fade away, they'll always linger and be a reminder of what we once were.
Thanks for sharing this poignant piece with us, and keep on writing!
The sun comes up, the sun goes down,
my skin is wrinkled, my shell is brown,
you speak of things my years have known,
yet all my days elsewhere were sown.
I’ve not seen this and I’ve not seen that,
to me it seems the world’s still flat,
and if I linger longer here,
the day’s the same from where I peer.
Line cont: 8
Rhyming couplets
For Express It In Eight, 03.24.24
Prompt: Jonathan the tortoise is the oldest known living land animal.
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