Online journal capturing the moment and the memory of moments. A meadow meditation. |
L'aura del campo 'é a lua, é a lua, na quintana dos mortos' ♣ Federico García Lorca ♣ L'aura del campo. A breeze in the meadow. So it began the last day of Spring, 2005; on the 16th day of the month of Light of the year 162. This is a supplement to my daily journal written to a friend, my muse; notes I do not share. Here I will share what the breeze has whispered to me. PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS! I LV COMMENTS! On a practical note, in answer to your questions: IN MEMORIUM VerySara passed away November 12, 2005 Please visit her port to read her poems and her writings. More suggested links: These pictures rotate. Kåre Enga ~ until everything was rainbow, rainbow, rainbow! And I let the fish go. ~ Elizabeth Bishop, The Fish |
Clover Middle School Teachers' Lounge You chew; they moo. Then laughing, fling food AT you. Rude! they need to change their attitude. If not... you'll sue. K.E. 22.february.2020 2/2 8/8 2/2 Stanza/line breaks and punctuation slow the reader down and emphasize certain words. Overall rhyme a/a b/b x/a. Internal rhymes by syllable: aa xa xxbbcdac xxaxxdxc xx xa An iambic rhythm is possible when reading out-loud, especially the second time. Assonance brought to you by "oo": chew/moo/food/you/rude/to/attitude/you'll/sue. "At you. Rude!" mirrors "attitude". Title provides place and a bit of irony. 24 syllable prompt: attitude. After writing I realized prompt was "attributes" not "attitude" Oh, well! |