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Jul 28, 2017 at 10:48pm
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New and looking for review
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People seem to becoming to you for reviews, so I figured I would too.

I'm new to this site and to writing/poems again so I'd like to know more of what I'm doing wrong/right. I am aware some of my work is rough and amateur, but as of now, so am I. Just would like to learn. Here's 3 various works.

 Bedtime mantra  (E)
New to poetry. Trying out a descending word count.
#2128914 by Craig Henders
Lines=6

 Should stay simple  (E)
A realization I never need to say more than needs to be said.
#2129090 by Craig Henders
Haiku

 The train to... (for The Writer's Cramp)  (E)
At some point we just want to enjoy something simple.
#2129441 by Craig Henders
Words=808
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New and looking for review · 07-28-17 10:48pm
by Craig Henders
Re: New and looking for review · 08-10-17 7:55am
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Re: Re: New and looking for review · 08-10-17 9:29am
by edgework

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