Very nice. I like this poem very much.
I where you say, "In failure, he found salvation."
No matter how cloudy it gets..the sun is still here. :)
It's hidden but its there and very real. Its walking in
faith not by sight. This doesn't mean carelessness.
It is subordinating the visible world to the invisible Shepherd
of our soul. God is good. He will guide us.
I really like your poem :) a lot.
The Butterfly. Going through changes can be a struggle but
the transition brings resurrection. :) "he found salvation."
I like this "stand connected to the earth." The earth has its season
and people also. The cycle of life. Each season brings its rewards.
"Trees still clinging to leaves, " wanting to eat a little more :)
Fall is the time for harvesting. Its the time for gathering :)
AND" where the leaves have already taken their dance" the
celebration of death begins. Life remains..the cycle begins again.
As some are deciduous others are evergreen :) some stay in
others are out..either way..there's a whole lot a "shaking" going on :)
Separation can be dire. We are given windows. Each window has a light.
Sometimes its hard to see when sadness draws the shade.
When one remains strong in the arms of God and nature we find this little
girl will be "a woman Who learned to grow And be a good person"
We find within ourselves the love is never lost.
Making life difficult with "your phone, your desk, the floor, the lawn,
yes you're looking for love the demand of clutter" everything seems
to be stacking up.
It is possible to find what you're searching for. Look at the things you
found. Don't make it chaotic by introducing confusing. Peace and clarity
is within and they bring composure. This gives us assembly with self. :)
This is sad. I understand.
I have a best friend that has a similar situation.
Sometimes I think taking one from a situation to an area
that gives one familiarity is so important. This is touchy though.
It depends where they are in the illness. I have a best
friend that wanted to see New York again. I grabbed the meds,
loaded the car and we went. The happiness it brought was
so worth it. Seeing places and friends again brought this person
to a new perspective. It was good..so worth it..finding those smiles.
Mocking birds aren't the only ones who repeat what they hear. :)
mimicking the sounds
people sing like mocking birds
repeating whats said
I like where you say:
"the nighttime songster sings
to offer Mankind hope" that's nice.
We need that hope after reading your
other poem "The Canine's Howling At The Moon" :)
Astounding! I can't put into words how overwhelming this poem is.
If I could give it all the stars in the universe..I would. I LOVE it!
So amazing. It has such meaning. I can't even take one line from
this piece in fear of being intrusive. The journey is so captivating.
It fits so beautifully! Thank you.
I like very much how this poem is worded.
It tells me of the rise and fall of wedlock.
When you say,
"Your eyes,seemed to hold in their mysterious depths
secrets.An undiscovered world of promise, and passion,
thousands of creatures hidden in coral reefs." This
reveals a pouring of information. His/her heart, soul and mind overflows with
a wealth of uncharted territory There's so much faith leaning in the hope of
what will be. You both walk the shores..the extent
of the ocean is waits. Corals are part of it. Meeting the creatures has to
be approached with an open mind.
Sorry to read about "the ruins" of you "dream". Marriage has its own ecosystem.
What we put into it affects the environment. Sometimes things are thrown in
that take a lot of clean up. I hope things were worked out.
A very informative poem. It reads like a story. Thank you for sharing :)
Through my window, I have seen. Does she carry a candle? She walks in the
rhyme of the wedding march. The dress, "The style of her time" yes.
I feel she's upstairs You say maybe its the "passageways of the
old Victorian house." Very interesting.
Wonderful poem.
"His loving Truth my constant food." the bread of life. When we
get into the Bible we are nourished. Each day we have to eat in
order to remain satisfied.
God our constant Guide.
This is nice here,
"Keep teaching me The Way to go
Living Waters through me to flow." I love that.
You state here, "Just let it flow out of your individuality."
I agree. One has to let it go. Allowing life's offers to flow
freely. We learn to move on. Let God's movement take care of the
currents. The stream of Gods love is "His gift offered" to everyone.
The spirit of miracles lives in us.
Grace.. so elegant in your passage.
Its care flows freely by the creek within us.
"God's healing hand of Love," guides the water.
The transmission of the soul lead by the heart.
Gods "compassion descending from above" is
given through the carriage of love. :)
I love a clean kitchen. Doing dishes is part of it.
I like using fragrant free soap so I can add my own scents.
Lavender, lemongrass is so refreshing.
I believe a person can prevent bugs, spiders and
mice by keeping things clean and in order.
Essential oils are great for keeping insects and spiders
at bay. I use the lavender, lemon, cedarwood and cinnamon
in a spray bottle with some water and dish soap.
It smells so awesomely nice.
I'm happy to see dishes aren't a negative for you.
This is a refreshing piece. It gives a sense of freedom. One can breathe again.
I love the ending. It gives me joy. The family here is amazing. The daughter
smiled because she understood her mother and accepted the situation. I see
the daughter is a climber too :) I love that.
Smiling..I know where you're coming from :) Something innocent
looked upon in a suspicious manner by others. The talking goes on..
"never stilled."
But we know some of those wish they had the same :)
We are never alone. "when you see your blindness
you will awaken" :) I find that fascinating.
I believe it totally. Its so enlightening when senses are
peaked and awareness becomes so informative. Things
are learned..spirituality broadens. Its always with us..
being a big part of living. All we have to do is climb
within and the soul touches upon the unseen. It connects
the wholeness. The body and soul interact with the energies.
What we think operates the "footing." Let the "humming"
of the spirits be the guide :)
This piece is of someone special. A person needing more just as we all do.
The difference is how this individual sees the good and keeps going.
Hanging onto hope...never giving up..that takes strength. Not everyone
can see such happiness in the most innocent and natural means of life.
I like this person.
The log will spin, the earth will always rotate. Each time we get dizzy
we become stronger in finding the balance. Sometimes days goes on
what seems like forever. Change will happen, it has to. No two days
are exactly alike . We just think they are. Little turns of variations will shift
in such subtle ways. Keep your eyes on the smiles and giggles that bring
the beauty of freedom in your life. The stability is there. :)
Very nice. You stir your "morning coffee" and stare at the "cream sheets"
I like that very much. You are missing the sugar as you think of him or her.
I love the pebble in your pocket..the touching, the reminder..the unconditional
love.
The mark of the beast who carries a scar.
the lion will not sleep.
Someone wants power. Tired of being looked down upon.
People will finally see who's on top..as we act together.
Something is feeding from the other.
Or
Someone or something has changed. Where its said,
"You grow old and tired, " is it them or you doing the growing old.
We look at a person with exhaustion. So who is that really
"grow old and tired, " ?
OR
Two individuals so different but yet so much alike. They shook the world.
Now time to move on. Maybe they don't see things the same anymore.
Good poem. I like it very much. I see many animals but we are all one with nature :)
God gives us direction through the Bible.
Are we looking through the word for guidance
each day or are we waiting for a rainy day.
You say,"From my heart it will come unto you,"
this is true. We have to open it in order for
the word to flow freely then we will "come to see the truth plain out,"
When I read this poem, I can't help but think there is something
the writer wants us to know about. Something more than Godly.
Where you mention "I ask you in advance to examine a warning,"
Its as if the individual is saying clearly..know this before knowing me.
"You'd only find the knowing of God's wrath." remember "God is good." :)
We don't have to know suffering to know God.
We just have to accept his existence.
Wolverines are tough. They are cute but they will turn
you upside down. I'm surprised it didn't eat more of you.
"60 new scars and 300 stitches" is that all :)
I don't even know how one manages to bring this little guy
with a big temper home.They are solitary animals and won't
be messed with. :)
Wonderful poem. I have a recuse dog. He was a mess.
Turned out to be such a good dog. Animals can be
a persons "closest friend" I find people tend to see
the cute, cuddly, adorable pet but then realise there's
something more..it's called caring, feeding, walking,
and cleaning, a visit to the vet.
Some of my best cats were strays. I loved them so much.
Cats do the craziest things. :)
You sound like a wonderful person. I hope your puppy brought
or brings you much happiness. VERY good poem
I love what you wrote. I can see it all and the taste is
wonderful too. I love "hearing the chorus of croaks and
chirps of tree frogs and katydids." very nice. Have you
ever seen a Luna Moth? Its worth stopping everything to look.
So beautiful.
I like homemade ice cream..yummmm. My in laws made
it. I liked them too. So many people talk terribly about in laws.
I loved mine very much.
Your home sounds very cozy..inviting..hospitable. very nice.
Wow..I love what you wrote! Where do I start.
Here where you say, "This beautiful instrument strikes the ears and our souls,
as lighting does to the sky when it cracks the earth." That's so well written.
AND here, "sounds rises high as do our spirits; " AND
"beyond the towers of the great cathedrals and to the highest points in the sky."
Above and beyond..yes. I love it. I know what you're talking about.
One can get this from nature..from anything that brings that awe..from flying the skies
or sailing the sea..what ever it IS that giving one a touch of heaven.
Wow! a wonderful piece you wrote. Good job!
I love this: "It unleashes angels and awakens demons." It is the music that empowers"
Music is to the receiver the power of the energy within. SO awesome.
I think each religion has it's comprehension..its note. It's there when we listen..It adds to the song..brings harmony.
All is one. Finally whole. We all need to learn how to play..God our instructor..wow..what an orchestra.
A touch of heaven indeed.
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