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Rated: E | (5.0)
That's an amazing story!!!

I believe that Jesus comes to us with a still, small voice, too, so I don't believe that the less bouncy services are by any means dead, but this certainly seemed to be where Jesus wanted this family to be. Perhaps, this was so that they could more often experience the feeling of real and original conversations instead of simply repeating the prayers composed by others!

Do you remember that Shirley Temple movie about the little princess and how the nasty housemother said a very formal grace but Sarah (the girl Shirley played) continued the prayer with a conversational tone? I think she did the same thing in the movie, Heidi, if I remember correctly.

Here's a delightful prayer by a child...

http://tinyurl.com/vbz84

Blessings!
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Review of SHOW ME HOW  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Now, this is what I would call really sweet, simple, heartfelt, and well-crafted! I could see it illustrated with delicate pictures and becoming a wall poster or a greeting card. In short, great work!
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Review of Tiny Fingers  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very sweet and clever in a very beWITCHing way!

I wonder if another name for the story of Hansel and Gretel might be Guess Who's Coming To Dinner. LOL

I've heard of Chicken Fingers, but was that old bat wanting Children Fingers?

Anyway, that's one great fractured fairy tale, and all I can say is that I hope that old hag can stand the heat, because she's going to be stuck in the kitchen BIGTIME!

I wonder if she'll smell like chicken...

Cheers!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Review of The movie titles  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really something to get one's creative juices flowing!

I hope that everyone reading this will decide to come over and participate in the fun.

Just look at all that's been written here already.

Remember to read the instructions carefully and then take off and have a little creative fun!

Cheers!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Review of Death of a lilt  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A tall, black man, eh? Anyone we know? Will he be writing a book about this?

It sounds as if our young singer should have gone with her gut-feelings and not gone to the door. At that point, she probably wished that she were taking part in the family vacation.

I wonder why the man was covered with blood and what his motives were for coming to kill her.

Of course, this is just a peek into 300 words worth of an event, and you did a great job of capturing this slice-of-life.

Kudos!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I've seen things, but don't think of them as ghosts but, instead, as signs and visitations.

Like the first New Year's Eve after my dad passed away, my mom and I were on our traditional drive into New Year's Day--something the three of us had done together for so many years.

We were both thinking at the same time how we missed having him with us when this red dot of light began dancing merrily all over the dashboard for several seconds.

In October of 1992, one of our church members passed away on Friday. There had been a wedding scheduled at the church on Saturday, and, during the rehearsal, a sparrow got into the sanctuary from somewhere and alit temporarily on the altar. Our minister remembered how George's widow had requested His Eye Is On The Sparrow for one of the songs to be played at his funeral that Monday, and he saw it as a comforting sign.

During a sermon about The Holy Spirit at a friend's church, a dove flew into the church through an open window and alit on the minister's shoulder.

While I was out driving somewhere, the favorite pop song of a friend who had passed away when we were both sixteen came on the radio--and I suddenly was looking at an amazing sunset.

Mike had been an artist, and my dad had once said that God would probably let him help to paint the sunsets some of the time.

Sometime after that, the song came on the radio again--and, not only was the sunset a knockout, but, also, I passed by some storage sheds (located close to Indianapolis) called Flat Rock Storage.

Mike had drowned in the Flat Rock River in the Shelbyville area on May 31, 1969.

I hope what I've shared with you has blessed you!

Hugs!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very sad, and you feel pity for all three of these characters along with so many like them who aren't introduced beyond a general way.

Tom sounds beligerant, which might make him less sympathetic, but even he is to be pitied.

Cheryl and the unnamed cop seem especially pitiful, because they're obviously elderly and going through this.

This is a story where, as you read it, you want them to wake up from it as if it were just a bad dream--but it isn't.

A very stirring and heartrending story done in a mere hundred words.

Kudos!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful idea, and I hope you get lots of people interested. I'm writing a public review of it and have just presented an awardicon to it, as well as sharing three links and two bitems that you might find helpful.

Give your pastor my best, as he's doing something very meaningful that will touch a lot of people's lives in positive ways!

Blessings!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Review of A Cry for Help  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great flash-fiction. It can either be kept as flash-fiction or it can serve as an introduction to a longer story or novel.

The first part of it is so intense while the last part of it is so simple.

This, to me, symbolizes how simple it can be to get help for a problem--whether an emotional one or a practical one (e.g. getting someone to assist you in some task)--by merely asking.

Kudos!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is really sweet!

It just shows that to be erotic doesn't have to mean to be crude!

I somehow imagine your star being one that is all glittery around the edges and has a sweet smile on its face, and you and your lover look like that sweet "L*Heart*VE IS" couple from back in the sixties and seventies.

Let me go see if I can find some kind of website for them. brb...

I'm back with a couple of items you'll enjoy...

http://tinyurl.com/y699wn

http://tinyurl.com/unl33

The last one is such a sweet website!

Laters!
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Review of AGNOSTIC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm one of those believers, but I also believe that what you've written is very honest and worthwhile. Let me suggest a really good book that will be a breath of fresh air after the way that you were introduced to the concept of God.

THINK AGAIN A Response to Fundamentalism's Claim on Christianity by Dr. Gary Cox

Your essay was most enjoyable to read, and I really like your ideas. I believe that you see God more clearly than many who call themselves believers, and I'd like to paste in a poem (by another writer, but giving him full credit) that I was reminded of while reading this.

You will find the poem by scrolling down past my closing and signature.

Blessings!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*

Abou Ben Adhem
by
Leigh Hunt


Abou Ben Adhem (may his tribe increase!)
Awoke one night from a deep dream of peace,
And saw, within the moonlight of his room,
Making it rich, and like a lily in bloom,
An angel writing in a book of gold:-
Exceeding peace had made Ben Adhem bold,
And to the presence in the room he said,
'What writest thou?' - The vision raised its head,
And with a look made of all sweet accord,
Answered 'The names of those who love the Lord.'
'And is mine one?' said Abou. 'Nay, not so,'
Replied the angel. Abou spoke more low,
But cheerly still; and said 'I pray thee then,
Write me as one that loves his fellow-men.'

The angel wrote, and vanished. The next night
It came again with a great wakening light,
And showed the names who love of God had blessed,
And lo! Ben Adhem's name led all the rest.
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Review of A Bit About Me  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I wonder if there's something in the water here that makes writers and others kinds of artists, because there certainly are plenty of them.

A couple of good friends (a brother and sister) are witty, and the sister is crafty (and they also have two other witty sisters), but they aren't writers. However, one of their ancestors (James Whitcomb Riley) certainly was! Of course, we have Mellencamp and The Wright Brothers, and a man whom I've known since he was seven or eight years old drums for them at times and now has his own band. His name's Dane Clark. His mom is a retired special ed teacher, and I used to help out in her class when I was in high school. Here's a story I wrote about those special times:

http://tinyurl.com/uteu9

BTW...don't you just love Tiny URL!?! If you haven't already become a fan of this website, check it out...

http://tinyurl.com/

And there are others from our state, too, as you likely know.

Let's compare Indiana backgrounds when we both have time. For starters, I was born and raised in Anderson, graduated from Pendleton Heights H.S., graduated from University Of Indianapolis back when it was still called Indiana Central University (Class of 1976) and took some graduate studies at Ball State.

Better go ahead and send this, as computers have a way of becoming unpredictable and evaporating what's there! AAARRRRRRRGH!

I'm making this a public review to introduce everybody else to you!

Hoosier Hugs!
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Review of Take My Gift  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a really beautiful tribute to your sister! Does she write here, too? I hope that she will get to read this, because I know that it will really move her!

Blessings!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is going to haunt me for a very long time, and I'm already in the process of sharing it with others. I've taken a quick look at your port and see that you also have lots of other great things to be reading, so I'm glad that you've decided to make yourself at home here and share your wisdom.

Already, I've shared you outside of this site, and you can find what I've said by going here:

http://www.judysbook.com/members/AJ1952Chats/quest...

You haven't seen the last of me yet!

Blessings!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Review of Un-Familiar  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The words of this poem can be anything from someone looking in the mirror and talking to herself as she views herself in the present and realizes that she has become exactly what she had hoped to become since many years ago to a great pick-up line for a guy to use when picking up a girl.

I've watched short dramas that tell a story about someone encountering either a past or future incarnation of themselves at some time when he/she needs some words of wisdom from that person--or, sometimes, they encounter someone (such as a future child or grandchild) who hasn't been born yet and will never be born unless the person who encounters this person-from-the-future changes directions such as deciding not to have an abortion or deciding not to commit suicide. Still other times, there have been stories about someone encountering a child who will grow up to be that person's parent, teacher, etc. and will come to a greater understanding of what has made that person the person she/he is today.

Anyway, your poem makes me think of this.

Blessings!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Review of Elevator  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this subtile, verbal catfight! Makes me think back to high school days when there was this one girl, and we always ended up picking on each other.

Because I was chubby, she, one day, made this sign language of a fat person and pointed to me. So, I ran my hands over my C-cup body to sign a straight-up-and-down figure and then pointed to her!

The things we do as teenagers! LOL

Kudos!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Review of When Nature Calls  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Too much information--and I loved it!!!

Actually, the level of information was just right, and I found it to be highly entertaining.

Will it be any easier for you to go in public in the future now that you've been through the boot camp?

Glad that everything came out all right--even if it DIDN'T go down all right!

Cheers!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Review of Mom's Pumpkin  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really love this story! It's so sweet! Have you ever seen the movie called Jack Frost where the boy's father comes back as a snowman? There was some kind of sequel made to it (or something having the same name), but I've never seen it, and I hear that it was awful. But this movie was good, and your story makes me think so much of it. I hope that you'll get the chance to watch it.

Happy Halloween!
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Review of The Journey  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It looks as if this story is chugging right along. I hope that your other story will pick up as well. Both of them are great stories, and I've enjoyed exploring both of them. Will be back again and again looking to see what's been added in the future.

Kudos!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Review of Last Day  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is more of a scrap of a story than a complete story. There needs to be more to it than that for it to be called a story.

Suggestion: You might put some story scraps together in one item and call them story scraps.

When the time comes that you have the rest of the story ready to go with it, you can go into your story scraps and pick out the passage you want.

Good Luck!
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Review of The Witch's Prize  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is going to be a really fun story! I hope that you like my additions, and I hope that people will be inspired to write subsequent chapters.

This is going into public reviewing so that others will be sure to see it and, hopefully, play along.

Kudos!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Review of Explaining My Son  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your son is nothing short of amazing!!!

I believe that the very worst part of his condition is how it puts a damper on his ability to trust--which, in turn, causes his other problems.

But you tell him that I said he is amazing.

Speaking of which, so is this personal account!

What you have written is the best account of A.S. that I've ever come across in my entire life and will be a tough act for others to follow--even though others with their own experiences SHOULD follow, as people need all of the information they can get about those things that make others seem "different."

There should be more acceptance of others and less finger-pointing, imo.

I'm going to give you a Jesus number of GPs for now, but be expecting an awardicon just as soon as I can make one up!

Blessings!
AJ wants U 2 meet The CanMan! *Delight*
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Review of The Hanging  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is such a sad story--so sad that nobody sensed how troubled this young man was during any time in his life in time to save his life from going in this direction.

You tell this story in a matter-of-fact way, and, in every word of it, I can feel this person's defeatist attitude.

He blames nobody and takes responsibility for everything--which shows that, if nothing else, he has at least an ember of character.

As I read this, I think of this question:

Is there a little boy out there (or a little girl) who seems to simply be existing with very little motivation? What can you do? Could you, perhaps, study this child to find out his/her potential and try to lovingly steer him/her in this direction and make it fun/interesting for him/her?

What had this young man's parents done wrong?

In so many ways, not a thing.

They were a Christian family and one with a high ethic of work and responsibility.

But I wonder if things would have turned out differently had they done things with their kids on the spur of the moment "just because."

Things such as having an impromptu picnic--or, perhaps, simply taken the time to tell their kids how much they were loved more often.

On one level, it seemed as if they were a close-knit family doing everything together--yet, it also seems as if the parents were more distant than they should have been with their children.

I personally think that it's more important to be a good hugger than a rigid taskmaster when it comes to raising kids.

It was a sad picture of this father with tears in his eyes asking what he and his wife had done wrong over the year.

For one thing, the father should have actually apologized to the son for hitting him in the jaw for coming home drunk.

At least, he and his wife were there for their son each day once they realized how great his problems were--but, by then, it was too late.

Very sad story...and it didn't really have to go in this direction if only some people had taken more notice years earlier.

Write On!
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Review of My Smile  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is the final one of your poems that you have displayed, and I believe that it's my very favorite one of all of them.

You need to put an apostrophe where you've said My hearts one sigh. It should read My heart's one sigh.

Other than that, don't change it!

If it were a piece of prose, I would want you to use more punctuation--and I generally do, myself, when writing something along these lines--but poetic license leaves that up to you.

You can look at it again and decide if you want to add the punctuation. My opinion? I think that a little more punctuation would make it flow better in places, but the final decision is up to you.

Warm Fuzzies!
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Review of My Wings  
Rated: E | (5.0)
When I read this poem, I remember how, when I was 12 1/2 (in 1965, which was the summer between sixth and seventh grades), my folks and I went to Hawaii where we stayed for two weeks.

During the first few days, we took several guided tours of the island of Oahu (where Honolulu is) but, also, had free time. Our group then flew to some of the outer islands of Hawaii (the state). Our first two nights were spent on the island of Hawaii--first night in Hilo and next night in Kona. We next flew to the island of Maui. On the final night, we flew to the island of Kaui (not sure of spelling, but it was something like that). We then flew back to Honolulu.

Once there, we still stayed in the same apartment type of hotel room (Reef Tower building), but we were now on our own as far as touring, so we rented a car and drove back to some favorite places, plus added a few of our own.

Every night, we would go to The International Marketplace where we would drink something called a Julani (something like an Orange Julius in a choice of orange or pineapple flavor) and would watch the entertainment which always included, among other things, a cool guy named (not sure of the spelling on some of these names, places, and products) Lanokila who was a stand-up comedian, master of ceremonies, and a singer. One of the acts he introduced was this young man who danced around with fiery torches and ate the flames.

We enjoyed listening to the bells from Aloha Tower which played at different times during the day.

I loved the ocean there, too. On the island of Maui, the waves went in and out with such a beautiful and interesting pattern. On the island of Oahu, I loved being able to swim underwater with my eyes open and seeing a whole new world that had such a wonderful blue overall color.

One day, we even went to where they were filming the movie, Hawaii (which we would see when I was in eighth grade, which is when it was in a theater in Indiana--the Circle Theatre in Indianapolis on Monument Circle, which is now home to the Indianapolis Symphony Orchestra), and one of the extras and I were flirting with each other. He was the deckhand with dark hair who was wearing a striped t-shirt at the first part of the movie.

Speaking of flirting, we had this wonderful head tour guide who was available to answer questions, etc. the entire time. Also had a beautiful singing voice. His name was John Cash, believe it or not, but he looked more like Dan Blocker. I'll never forget how he made me feel like a princess. I was the only child in our tour group, so he kinda spoiled me by making over me and making me feel all grown up. I had a crush on him, even though there was a boy in my grade at school on whom I had a bigger crush. I think I'll always have a crush on John Cash.

Anyway, in short, Hawaii was a very pleasant experience and very beautiful and enchanting.

I was glad to leave at the end of our stay to fly back to San Francisco to visit for another week with Uncle Finley and Aunt Marce, and I was glad to get back to Indiana. Only one time had I ever considered leaving Indiana and living somewhere else, and this wasn't the time.

But Hawaii was still a place that I wished were closer and less expensive to get to. If it were, I would have gone back a whole lot more.

Which brings me back to the original thought here.

I remember one night that I had this dream. By then, several weeks had gone by since our trip to Hawaii.

In the dream, I was back in Hawaii with my folks, and we were walking along a sidewalk in Honolulu. There was a light mist going on (which was what usually happened instead of rain) and the bells of Aloha Tower were playing.

Then, I woke up and found myself in my own bedroom.

Keep in mind that I'm a dyed-in-the-wool Hoosier, and there has never wanted to live anywhere else besides Indiana (with the exception of when I REALLY fell for a guy while visiting Acapulco a year later and thought about marrying him someday and living down there).

I might want to live somewhere for a time (such as while teaching at a one-room schoolhouse or something like that), but Indiana has always been so much home to me.

Even so, I woke up from dreaming about Hawaii and found myself back in my bedroom, and I lay there in bed after that crying for awhile.

This poem reminded me of this.

Hugs!
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