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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Spring in my Sox

My First Impression:What interesting dolls! They are very elaborate and detailed. You've clearly put some time into them.

My Favorite Part:I like the dolls that have a little "side kick" with them. I've never seen anything like these. How long does it take you to do a doll?

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Keep up the great job. Thank you so much for sharing these pictures. I think the little one in pink (2nd row, 2nd picture) is my favorite of all of them.

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Hello Jay O'Toole

My Thoughts:I agree with you. A finite being contemplating infinity is hard to wrap the mind around. You do an excellent job of it, though. I know it is by God's grace - but I am thankful that you have shared this message. It is so important.

My Favorite Part:Exhorting one to consider wisely, as you said, "There are no refunds when this ticket is punched." The desire for souls to come to the saving knowledge of Christ - it is reminiscent of what Paul said to his Roman captors: "Paul replied, “Short time or long—I pray to God that not only you but all who are listening to me today may become what I am, except for these chains.” (Acts 26:29)

My Suggestions:Obedience to our Savior - how can you top that? *Smile*

Thank you so much! I am always uplifted by your writing, and the earnestness of your messages.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating }

My First Impression: I am freezing myself...getting ready to make some hot tea.

My Favorite Part:"cold seeping into ones bones" - a very apt description.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:With the climate changing, we all better get ready to bundle up! Thank you for sharing. P.S. I'm only 56, and I feel as though I'll never be warm again *FacePalm*

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Tina Lina Ruby Ray

My Thoughts:What an interesting take on the story of the Fall. It is clever, and honestly, I'd like to have more backstory on how the serpent got such a bad reputation.

My Favorite Part:11th stanza; Eve being confused about "taking one little bite". Excellent visuals with your words.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Just a little curious why the first stanza is indented, unless it is for just to grab your attention. I saw no mechanical issues. Your spacing made the poem easy to read.

I just wanted to welcome you to Writing.Com! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with this story/poem. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Keep up the great job!

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Review of PORCH PONDERINGS  
for entry "Back in Montana" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham

My First Impression:I am so happy you are home. It's nice to take a break now and then, but home is where I like best. Sounds like you do, too.

My Favorite Part:I like the thought you left at the end of your entry. It's nice to think that someone somewhere does think of me, if only for a few moments at a time.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I hope you figure out how to clean your house. LOL. I'm so ready to leave these 4 walls, just so I can enjoy coming home again. Appreciate your writing.

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Review of A POETS SOUL  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Monty ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:You explain the "poet's soul" quite well. I catch myself reading others' works, and how I might approach the subject myself using my own words.

My Favorite Part(s)The last stanza - goal succeeded when in reading you found the poet's soul. A true statement. When something you read pricks your heart, or gives you pause, or even angers you, then you have indeed found the poet's soul.

Suggestions/Questions:I didn't find any mechanical issues. I love the larger font for reading. It is an excellent poem.

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Review of SEARCHING  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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DearMonty ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:A wonderful story in poetry form. Neither one giving up, when everyone else seems to have thrown in the towel.

Favorite part:The last two lines: She has climbed the mountain, It's all down hill from here. A nice play on words. Downhill as in physically, and downhill in the sense that now all will be well. Loved reading this story/poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Review of HOMECOMING.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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DearMonty ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:I can see why this writing won for free verse. Very compelling reading.

Favorite things:I like how you made the words bold, so it is easier to read. Thank you for that. Life's journey is like that, feeling that being a "tired, forgotten man" while life just goes on all around. While I understand this sentiment, I have a feeling that you would be anything but "forgotten". Well done! I'm glad that I have read this poem.


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Review of Troubles brewing  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Adherennium Dr of Phoolishness

My Thoughts:Wow! Talk about a creepy read. I completely understand why you wrote "Some children just don't know how to 'play nicely'". Your writing gave me goosebumps.

My Favorite Part:The last stanza, As her Troubles filled the sky, Emily smiled, I wonder why.Frankly, it gives the impression that Emily is a bit of a sociopath. Troubles filling the sky, and a child-like demeanor. It is hard to reconcile the two ideas.

My Suggestions:I saw that this was written for a contest, and I hope that you did well with it. I'm still shuddering as I complete this review. You definitely have a flair for the macabre.

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for entry "Home For Three Weeks!" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sum1 }

My Thoughts:Good Heavens! We are polar opposites when it comes to being busy. Not by choice, mind you; but I got tired just reading about your adventures. I'm sorry that you didn't get to see the Balloon Fiesta, but I know there is only 24 hours in a day, and you use up 23 1/2 each day, it seems.

My Favorite Part:Your enthusiasm about your job. I get the "feeling needed" part, and once I'm able to get back to work, I hope to feel needed as well.

My Suggestions:I'd say slow down, but it looks as though you might be speeding up...Mongolia? Wow. You will definitely have things to write about. Please take care of you.

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for entry "Earth Matters" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating

My Thoughts:An important, but often over-looked topic of environmental justice. You hit the nail on the head with the lack of concern of the politicians who only want to stay in office and not do anything but line their own pockets.

My Favorite Part:The things we can do: if enough people do only a little bit, then it is hopeful that maybe, someday, someone will listen. I also like how you referenced handing the "baton" to the next generation.

My Suggestions:I saw no mechanical issues in your writing. Thank you for enlarging the reading font. My poor eyes thank you *Glasses*. Appreciate your sharing your heart on this matter. It looks as though you took the time to assess this topic before you wrote it down. Thank you also for sharing a video, that brings the topic to life.

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Review of PORCH PONDERINGS  
for entry "Time in Ohio" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham }

My First Impression:Thank you for sharing your journey. It is a big deal to travel across country to take care of your mom.

My Favorite Part:Choosing an ice cream...that brought a smile to my face.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:The love you have for mom is evident. And your parting is sad, but pragmatic. Who knows when we will/if we will see each other again. I'm grateful that my mom is still with me. I should call her today.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Detective }

My First Impression:A watched pot never boils...oh my gosh, you are not even kidding! Hurry up and wait...It drives me crazy.

My Favorite Part:Until my shift finally ends...I can utterly agree with this sentiment. Your words paint a picture that is hard to bear at times. Almost, but not quite can be agonizing.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I liked your poem very much. I would have liked a little bit bigger font, for easier reading, but that is me. Thank you for sharing your poem, and I look forward to reading more of your work soon.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating }

My Thoughts:I like the way you combine poetry/prose with your essay on the leatherback turtle. You took a subject I may have not read were it written traditionally, and made it fun and easy to read.

My Favorite Part:The way you combine the information, and give the citations at the end of your writing. Definitely learned some new things today, such as the males do not come back to the beaches once they get into the sea. And being able to reach depths of 4000 ft under the sea is incredible!

My Suggestions:I have no suggestions, other than a font size up, perhaps. This was well thought out and executed. Brava!

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating

My First Impression:These are interesting recipes. I'm glad that you have written about Indigenous chefs and their recipes as an interesting addition to Thanksgiving dinners.

My Favorite Part: As I have a sweet tooth, the Maple-Glazed Acorn Squash with Toasted Pepitas caught my eye. I want to try out the Indian Donut recipe as well.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I like your prompt choice for the Journalistic Intentions contest. Good Luck on that.

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Review of A Simple Touch  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon

My First Impression:Well said! After commenting on my thoughts of uncomfortable topics, this poem was a cool drink of water.

My Favorite Part:The entire poem spoke volumes! Such is the power of a hand...a much needed sentiment nowadays.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Thank you for your encouragement, and kind words. It is much appreciated! Thank you so much for sharing *HeartP*

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Dear Lilli 🧿 ☕

What a cute little contest! Love how you used the drop notes in order not to clog up the page. Simple, easy to understand rules...will have to figure out the drop note on my pages. The page is colorful, and it looks like you've taken time with it. By the way, love the Halloween handle! See you soon!

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating }

My First Impression:At first reading, I thought it only doom and gloom. I'm glad I keep reading!

My Favorite Part:The verse about Humanity. While humans are a crazy bunch, I believe what you write about coming through: "Stronger and more unified".

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:While positive, I can only hope it happens while there is an Earth to enjoy, and that it will be soon. Keep up the great job!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hiyas Adherennium Dr of Phoolishness

Love the way you described the antics of your kitties. The imagery I could see in my mind's eye, and being a cat lover made this story/poem more enjoyable. I liked the picture that you put on your cover for this. I haven't heard of that program before, sounds like fun.
These kitties sound like a handful, and definitely have their own personalities. I love the ending of your poem "...symphony in Flat B". A very fun read. Saw no mechanical issues, and I like how you made the font a "readable size". Thank you for that, and for sharing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jay O'Toole }

My First Impression:I am so glad that you write in order to honor God. I enjoy your poetry, and it gives me a lift each time I do so.

My Favorite Part:I love the centering, and the enlarged font (my eyes appreciate it as well). "One day, 'they'll be the rage'" is my favorite verse. To me, they are already the "rage".

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Keep on writing, no matter what others may say or do. Our treasure isn't here, it's stored up for us in heaven. Blessings to you, Brother.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon }

My Thoughts:I found your story on the Read & Review port. I'm glad I did, as it gave me quite the chuckle...and groan *BigSmile*

My Favorite Part:I like how you went alongside of Gilligan's Island, but with a few twists. Very comical. and the "gruel and unusual punishment"...I did laugh outloud.

My Suggestions:I really don't have any. I saw that you wrote this a while ago for a contest. I hope it did well. The reading was smooth and easy, drawing me into your little castaway tale. Well done. I'm looking forward to seeing your other work in the future.

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Review of Seasonal Symphony  
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon }

My First Impression:The picture of the 4 season's tree caught my attention. The reading is just like the seasons. You give clarity to each in its turn.

My Favorite Part:I like the size font you used. I usually like poetry centered, but this is wonderful as it is. It is easy to read. I like how you explained the form of poetry. I like adding to my knowledge base...LOL

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:Nature's song is never-ending. I love it. Keep up the great work. I know it's been a while since you wrote it. Did your entry win the contest? I look forward to reading more of your work soon.

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Hello Writer_Mike }

My First Impression:First of all, I LOVE word searches. Secondly, this one was a little difficult for me; not that it's a bad thing, I just haven't been challenged in a hot minute with a puzzle.

My Favorite Part:Putting all the fun of WDC into your puzzle. At first I was confused with the cake ingredients, but then *FacePalm* Anniversary cake...LOL

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I had fun creeping around your portfolio, and plan on doing so again. Thank you for sharing.
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Review of Tabula Rasa  
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Hello Sophy

My First Impression:The title caught my eye and drew me in.

My Favorite Part:"The cursor really does beat with the rhythm of my heart" resonates with me. I have found myself many times staring at a keyboard/blank screen, not knowing what to do.

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:I found this on the Read & Review port. I like how the poem is laid out; breaking up the lines and making it appealing to the eye. It's been a while since you've written this (2002!!), and was wondering what the SLAM contest was - how did you do? I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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Hello Tim Chiu }

My Thoughts:I found this poem on the Read & Review. Even though this was written a little while ago, it is still true of the angst of becoming a teenager, and entering Jr. High and High School.

My Favorite Part:The fifth stanza is so very true...sadly, a lot of kids go with the crowd just to avoid being "different". The poem is very bouncy and flows well. It made it easy and fun to read.

My Suggestions:I saw no typos or grammar issues in your writing. Well done. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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