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Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge.

The was a nice poem! I loved the title! Overall it was a well written poem.
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Review of A Thousand Pieces  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge.

Very unique poem! I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!
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Review of The Onion  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge.

This is a beautiful personal essay! Thank you for sharing such a personal piece of yourself.

Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.
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Review of Dreams  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue from the Weekly Newbie Challenge here to review your piece.

This is a beautiful dedication! I'll bet many who have lost a child will cherish a poem such as this.

Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.
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Review of John  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue a reviewer with the Weekly Newbie Challenge. I want to thank you for entering this weeks challenge. Now on to the review.

There really is not to much for me to say because it was absolutely perfect. The only thing that I would change would for it to be a little longer. It kind of had an abrupt ending to it.

I am so sorry for your loss. This was a fabulous tribute to him.
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Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue again.

Again, this is a very nice piece. There are, however, quite a few spelling errors throughout the piece.

First thing, did you purposely capitalize the word "den"? Or the word "Finesse"?

This sentence is a little awkward.

It seemed like every time she'll get something figured out and then she'll try to express it to someone but she can't.

Maybe try this:

It seems like every time she figures something out and then tries to express it to someone, she can't.

Here is one example of a puntuation problem.

The JEANS girl that’s what

Change that to: The JEANS, girl, that's what.

I would run this through a spell checker or have someone double check it for you.

I enjoyed reading this and I look forward to reading more.
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Review of After Mass  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue from Angel2blue's Heavenly Reviews. As promised I will include 100 gps along with this review as being a part of the first 10 members to post their piece.

I enjoyed reading this story. It kind of reminds me of a fairytale. Did you write this for a child or was this written for an adult reader? It would be good for both. I can't find any fault in this story except for one minor spelling error. You misspelled "thieves" in the middle of the story.
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Review of A Troubled Mind  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hi,

For of all let me say that I enjoyed the poem. But all of us need improvement along the way so I am going to suggest one thing.

The one thing that this poem is missing is punctuation. If you added the punctuation I believe your ratings would go up.


Angel2blue
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Review of Silent Departure  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi,

I love experimenting with new poetry forms. I believe I did an etheree for a contest here on writing.com not to long ago.

This was beautifully done. It's such a sweet loving tribute to those who have passed on.

Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more from you.

Angel
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Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge.

I thought this short story was well written. I enjoyed reading it. This would be a good story for children.

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Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge.

This was a good poem. There are a couple of things that I can suggest:

*Star* First, I would not double space between each line. I think it would be okay to space between stanzas, though.

*Star* Second, I would double check and make sure that there are no punctuation mistakes.

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Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge.

I thought this was a nice piece. I think that it can be improved upon. Just read over it a bit and take any suggestions people throw at you. I think the rthyming is a bit off. But that might be what you wanted.

Anyhow it was a nice poem! Write on!

Good luck in the contest!

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Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

Nicely written.

Good luck in the contest.
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Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

Nicely written.

Good luck in the contest.
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Review of A Flower Seed  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

Nicely written.

Good luck in the contest.
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Review of The Old Captain  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

Beautifully written.

Good luck in the contest.
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Review of Intimacy  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

Nicely written.

Good luck in the contest.
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Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

Beautiful poem! Good luck in the contest.
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Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

Good story! Write on!

Good luck in the contest.
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Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, this is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

Nicely written.

Good luck in the contest.
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Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi,

This is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

This was a well written addition to the traditional Goldilocks & the Three Bears.

Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.
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Review of Patrick Angel  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

This is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

This was a very enjoyable piece to read. Animals do bring so much joy to our lives, don't they?

Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.
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Review of Color Blind  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi,

This is Angel2blue here to review your piece for the Weekly Newbie Challenge hosted by Annalynne.

This was a great piece. It was nicely written and I enjoyed reading it.

Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.
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Review of Sweetly  
Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (4.5)
Real nice. In the second stanza I did notice one spellig error. I believe hari should be hair. If I am wrong, please forgive me. Keep on writing.
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Review by angel2blue
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was great. Keep on writing.
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