Mothers are wonderful creatures, and thank God they
exist. Life wouldn't be the same without them.
I, perhaps would have made more paragraphs as the
second paragraph is a block. Changing perhaps some
of the '' I love you because''as a bit repetitive.
After reading another piece of your poetry I was curious
to read other of your poems. I find we are quite similar in
liking to write about love , nature and music.
I also enjoyed reading this piece and you're quite
right about the music, I feel you can almost sing to
a rythm.
Take care and it has been a pleasure to travel through
your portfolio.
Regards Auntynelly
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