Snap! I Know just the way you feel!
I hope after many disappointments you will finally find 'the one'.
Well written with good rhyming and display.
Emotional and sad, I could relate to it.
A very nice poem. Well written and with meaning.
In your words you describe a very solitary life and
the picture of the lighthouse seconds this.
A life of adventure and mystery and the excitement of
the sea and stars surrounding 'a lighthouse keeper'.
Well done I enjoyed it.
Hello Countrymom,
Hope you've been keeping well.
I liked this poem very much. Well displayed and words
flowed smoothly. A very sad and intense piece.
As I was reading I could almost hear the rain falling
hard. This seems to bring sad memories to you.
Actually when it rains, I quite like lying in bed snuggled up with a good book to read.
I feel protected at home and at ease.
This is a really well written piece. I enjoyed reading it. Describes fully what writing means to you.
I also agree about romantic poetry, which is my favourite ,that portrays the author in his true form.
It enables one to pour everything out on a piece of
paper, his life and character.
Beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this piece.
Well written, flows well and sad. I know the feeling.
The words you selected were adapt to strengthen the
passion and tension in the poem.
Reading along the lines, I felt that the outlay illustrated very well the words in line one: 'silently it slithers through her veins'.
This piece was very well written with true feelings.
Very tragic and devastating , you described Mia perfectly and her personality came through.
What a beautiful tribute to a friend.
I'm sure she has read it from above and is the angel
watching over you in this present moment.
Well done and I feel for your loss.
AuntyNelly
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Beautiful story and up-to-date condition of life.
Very sad and emotional and well written, Well done!
You portrayed the characters well and captured my
attention from the start.
I expected a very different ending as I didn't imagine
Karen be infected with Aids too. A very original proposal full of meaning.
Keep writing.
Anto
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What a wonderful idea! Greatly written and amusing.
I think you've described exactly how a Newbie feels
when he's just arrived. A story with all the tips of
'Writing.com' very original.
I remember when I first got introduced by a friend.
it was a real mystery at the beginning, so I was always
asking help and advice to her on how to use all the
tools. At first I couldn't understand a thing, so I
explored until slowly you just wake up the next day and
find you've mastered most of the mysteries.
Actually now I find it hard to keep away. I say to myself ' I'll just go on site for an hour', then go to
bed. Instead I find myself writing and reading till past 3 or 4 am and in the morning I get up at 7am to
go to work. I still get to work on time and wake up
in a better mood. I love it here! Thanks to you and all
your other fellow colleagues.
I enjoyed reading this piece. Well written and with
good display. The topic chosen I think is quite familiar with alot of mums.
I think when children grow up parents have to come to
terms with a new outlook to life.
They will miss the children and will have more time
on their hands, but it is right to let them fly to
experiment on unknown territories.
Well done.
Anto
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Beautiful! Really well written. Descriptive, the
loneliness and fright of a future mother's role is
portrayed well.
I like the ending where the girl takes position of her state, and has the courage to face the future.
Naming her unborn daughter Grace gives her the hope
to carry on.
A very accurate and informative survey.
I agree with you. I usually tend to rate higher than
lower but that all depends on how I feel about the
Piece,how it's displayed and the emotions it gives.
I know you should take the form and grammer into
consideration, but that often comes second place to
me even though it might be wrong.
I usually rate and review more with the heart than the
technical side. I guess that isn't much use to help someone improve their writing, but it certainly gives
them morew encouragement.
Well done and keep writing and reviewing.
Take care
AuntyNelly
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These topics are very interesting and helpful.
When reviewing many pieces in a day, it gets difficult to be original and to vary terminology.
Also one should bear in mind to review with a fresh mind as with tiredness you tend to give a rushed
review and perhaps omit to give the real feelings and
emotions the piece portrays.
Usually I try to read a piece several times before I review it to give my true impressions and suggestions
if I have any.
Keep up the good work. It's appreciated!
Take care
AuntyNelly
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I really loved this poem. A true touch to Christmas.
Very descriptive and good rhyming, I almost felt I
was there at bethlehem participating at this beautiful
spectacular scene.
Well done and keep writing.
AuntYNelly
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Well written apart from the 3rd paragraph in the middle: 'I and my past seem dead rights for all that times I could have spent the nights'. Perhaps it could
be written slightly different.
I enjpoyed reading this piece.
Well done and keep writing.
AuntyNelly
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