The title is really original and appropriate.
Well written, good flow and descriptive.
It's a shame that the majority of us are into jobs which we don't exactly like, but are forced to put up.
Only a few are lucky.
Personally I quite envy musicians who play music for a living. Although it's difficult , you see the passion they put into it when they're playing.
I think the same can be said for writing.
I wish you luck in your BA in English and hope your
future will be '' en rose''.
Keep writing and greetings for the upcoming festivities.
I really loved this poem.
Good phrasing and rhyming paragraphs.
Very emotional and romantic.
I particularly liked the part where you wrote 'what fate befalls us fools,who tumble in those pools?
It makes me smile to think that women are not the only fools in love!
Keep writing and well done!
Take care and enjoy the Christmas holidays.
AuntyNelly
I enjoyed this piece very much. Well written and very
touching.
Being Italian , I also read the italian original version. I preferred it, perhaps because italian is
a more romantic language. Also because it was born in
italian.
I have also written a poem in italian and then trnaslatedit to Italian, but I preferred the original version here as well.
If you have time I'd like you to read it and give me your point of view.
It's called ''Love and then nothing''and the original
italian version is called '' L'amore e po' niente.
I found this piece very interesting and well written.
The topic you have chosen isn't easy to write about,
but you have managed to describe death and how it could be coped with,in a very imaginative and original manner.
Personally, death has already touched me very closely
with the passing away of my father almost seven years
ago. This totally distressed me cancelled my life for about two years. Then one day you just wake up and find
that the pain and the memories are still there but have softened with time.
You think it's impossible to cope with but when you
have to there's no escape! Even if you fight for your
life the creature catches up on you!
This was a brilliant piece!
I really enjoyed reading it. It was very descriptive
and well written, so one could easily use his imagination and actually picture the situations and
and panoramas as in picture.
It made me think that almost everyone, once in their life has wished to change their situation and enjoy the freedom to choose to live as they prefer to.
Well done, keep up the good work!
Take care
AuntyNelly
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