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Review of Writing Naturally  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "The soul of these moving words
Aren’t only created from within."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was beautiful. I enjoyed the last stanza the most. This was well-written and well-thought out. Nice work! ^_^

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Review of Writing Lesson 2  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I see you when I sleep. I beg to stay with me when I wake up.
I won't ever leave you so don't you leave me!"

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this letter! This was interesting. I really enjoyed the ending. Nice work! ^_^

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Review of Success  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: " If I hocked my stamp collection and sold my old comic books maybe I could put together some $130, enough for a start."



Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was a sweet story. I very much enjoyed the concept. I liked how the old man spoke, it was amusing. Nice work on this story and the imagery! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: " "Maybe this is just a dream... yeah it's just a dream," mutters Tom as he lies down on his couch. "He" mutters "it's just a dream" till he falls asleep."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Some of the grammar needed some work. I have fixed up the imagery category for you. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was a nice story and I enjoyed the concept. Although, I think words such as "muttering" "replied" could be used a little less. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

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Review of Dream of Age  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Now I am finishing my eternal search.
"We'll" meet soon anew."



Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: I have fixed the imagery category for you. The grammar needed some work. Nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I liked how readable this poem was. The flow of this poem was well done. Nice work on this poem. ^_^

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Review of Dreams  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "From behind the pulpit he sees them
The people wait for his sermon."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I very much enjoyed the imagery and descriptions in this poem. This poem presented a nice concept as well. Nice work! ^_^

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Review of Lunacy  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Her hero though we are apart
and won't be meeting soon."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was a beautiul poem. I found this to be well-written and well-thought out. I liked the last stanza the most. Nice work! ^_^

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Review of I Dreamt a Dream  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "They spoke of nations they’d conquered before.
They talked of long walks on the Roman seashore."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was a nice poem, I liked the rhyme and flow to it. This was well-written and well-thought out, and I found it to be interesting. Nice work! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "They call to those lost
And in a worse state"


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was well-written and well-thought out. There was no rhyme but it did not take away from the poem. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review of Who goes there?  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Privately poised on our precipice,
perhaps unusually persistent in our patience,"



Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I really enjoyed the word usage! The imagery and desciptions were very nice. Nice work on this poem! ^_^

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Review of The Walk  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "So go now in peace and be as free
My fellow man as I am now."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling:Nice work. You may want to break this into stanzas to make it more readable.

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! Except for the suggestion above, I enjoyed the poem immensly. I found this to be well-written and well-thought. The ending was a nice touch. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "And as that thought fled, the words came to him: she was absolutely going to love him even more for this song…if that was possible."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! I enjoyed the ending of this story, although I would really like to know what his final song was. This was well-written and well-thought out, Nice work! ^_^

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Review of The Person He Is  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Because I was trying to make the future for Carter my worry, and in the process, I overlooked what an amazing person he is today."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: There were some run-on sentences, and incomplete sentences, but otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was a very beautiful and moving story. I very much enjoyed the ending of this story as well. This was nicely written and well-thought out. Nice work! ^_^

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Review of Mist  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Unmapped, fog in avenues shrouded
Chattering teeth and aching bones."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work!

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! The imagery and descriptions were beautiful. I very much enjoyed this poem, although you may want to break this poem into stanzas. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Yellow against black by the path in the park.
Yellow against black at your feet in near dark?"

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Some of the word usage did not make sense. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I did not quite understand the last sentence in the imagery category. This poem was interesting, but it seemed a little confusing at times. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review of Not Agian  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: " have grown so tired of you hiding my eyes,
Blurring my vision with your veil of lies."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: There was no punctuation used. Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was interesting, and I found the concept to be so true. Nice work! ^_^

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Review of I am  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I am the sun; that you dont let shine
the men; the you left "behind."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling:Some of the spelling needs some work. The "I" needs to be capitolized. Otherwise, nice work.

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I really liked the imagery and descriptions in this poem. This poem is well-written and well-thought out. Nice work. ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

Emotion: Does not apply

Grammar and Spelling: Does not apply

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this webpage! I really like the formatting of this contest. I especially enjoy the picture prompts. They are quite inspiring! Nice work! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Soon, I’ll free this beauty and open the door,
So all the world can see unicorns, at least once more."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was quite amusing when I found out what this poem was about. Nice work portraying the tattoes as imagery. Good job on this piece! ^_^

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Review of The Wedding Day  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: " He noticed her strawberry red lips as she smiled back at him, seeing his love reflected tenfold. His heart sang for her beauty."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this short story! This was so beautiful. I really enjoyed this 55 word story. I could imagine the groom and how he felt on his wedding day. Nice work! ^_^

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Review of Faith in the Four  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "The sounds of a cheering stadium "assaults" his ears.
And the jolt of an impact rocks his torso."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Some of the grammar needs a little work. I have fixed the imagery category for you. Otherwise, nice work. ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! The ending to this poem was nicely written and I enjoyed the beginning as well. It captivated my interest. This poem was well-thought out, although it seemed to read more like a story then a poem. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review of Dear Summer  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "It doesn't matter Summer,
your antics can never bring me down."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: I have fixed the imagery category for you. The grammar was a little inconsistent at times. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem almost seemed as though it were three poems combined into one. It was written in letter form, yet I felt there were three letters presented. Nice work overall; these were very well-written. ^_^

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Review of Dear Angela  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I’m going to have to go now; I’m tired and it was a long night. I worked until sunrise. I’m sweaty and dirty, so I’m going to take a shower and go to bed." Nice work



Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: There were some incomplete sentences in this letter. I have fixed the imagery category for you. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this letter! This letter was quite interesting, and I enjoyed the suspenseful ambiance portrayed in this poem. The ending was nice and a little creepy. Nice work! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "To spend the rest of my life with you,
I have never been so sure."


Emotion: Nice emotion...Love

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I really liked the rhyme and flow of this poem. This poem portrayed how I feel about my husband as well. Nice work displaying true emotions in this poem. ^_^

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Review of To the Ground  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "As I fall to the ground,
Who'll stick around?"


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this song! This song was so lovely. I enjoyed the ending of it, and I found this to be so well-written and well-thought out. Nice work on this song! ^_^

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