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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Partner in unified
Symmetry."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: There was inconsistent punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work.
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was definitely related to horses. Nice work on this overall! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "My whole life changed that day. I lost all sense of self and soon fell into caring for others more than myself. It has been too long since I thought of me, just me. It has been two years since that day."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! You may wish to provide spacing between your paragraphs. Otherwise, the story had an interesting concept, and I enjoyed the imagery presented. Nice work! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery!
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this interactive! This interactive was quite interesting. Nice work on the concept. Overall, nice work on this interactive^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "For he became
In time to tame
A man who said he loves me."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was beautiful. I found this concept to be so true and gently spoken. Nice work overall. ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery!
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Some grmmatical errors. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this interactive! I did not quite understand the concept of this interactive, but the storyline was pretty interesting. Nice work overall! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Butterflies and bees merrily flew
Up and down, to and fro,"
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work. ^_^
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was lovely. I found the concept of flowers have always been inspiring! Nice work with this 28 words. ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Feelings swell from a broken cage
They can no longer be traced
The line that was there
"Forever" broken"
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Also, there was a spelling error. I fixed the imagery category for you. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was so beautiful! I found the concept to be unique and the beginning was well-written. Nice work! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Until a piercing whistle sounds in my head. I stop laughing. I stop screaming. The whistling gets louder and louder. And everything turns black..."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work! ^_^
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! I found this story to be quite interesting and the ending was a surprise. Nice work! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery!
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Some grammatical mistakes. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this interactive! I really enjoy monsters, and I also believe that not all monsters would be considered "evil." Nice work on this interactive. ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "But poor, misused Triste watched humanity suffer with a cold heart. He turned away, never to look at the mortal world again."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This story was fascinating. I especially liked the ending. Nice work! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "None of it made any sense at the time. I couldn’t get the image of the demon out of my mind- that putrid, acidic breath and burning aura was stuck in my head. The room began to fade away and I welcomed it. Everything just... went dark."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This seems like its off to an interesting start. I cannot wait to see the rest of the story. Nice work! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Wishing the future would come and kill.
But days above all the rest,
Is time with you – my days are blessed."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! You may wish to break this into stanzas to make it more readable for the reader. Otherwise, nice work on this poem! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I came to love...
now my blood runs pure,
for love is life -- I've been set free,
as beauty brings me love."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was quite beautiful and I found the last stanza to be the most inspiring part. Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "When disguising themselves as the sparks of the heat.
They fly from their city to get something to eat."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work!
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! The descriptions and imagery in this poem were so beautiful! I am giving you a perfect 5 for the emotions portrayed as well as the imagery. ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Tread within the halls of my mind,
But careful say I, of what you find!"
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was a nice poem! I very much enjoyed the imagery and descriptions in this poem. It was well-written and well-thought out. Nice work! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery!
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Some grammatical errors. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this interactive! I have always enjoyed X-men comics and the TV series. This interactive was well-done. Nice work! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Harm will come
But the safeguards will fight it off
And love will always be left in the end."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work.
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was an interesting poem, and I enjoyed the concept. I thought this was well-written. Nice work! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: " I had nowhere to go. And now, my humanity was taken from me. I walked over to my former master’s body."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: The grammar needed some work. Otherwise, nice job! ^_^
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! I have always enjoyed a good wizard story. Nice work on introducing this sort of concept into a fascinating story. Nice work overall! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "No one can be different,
if one we are.
No one can be happy,
if one we are not."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: I have fixed the imagery category for you. No punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem seemed very repeatitive, but the concept was beautiful. Nice work on this poem overall! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: " He felt his consciousness turn inward, then slip away from his body. He felt nothing; he was nothing."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: The grammar needed some work. I have fixed the imagery category for you. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was very interesting. Nice work introducing a new concept. Good job overall! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Mr. Whoever has turned puce in the cheeks. But before he can say anything, I snatch my bag and head for the door. "Forget it."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was interesting. Nice work on the concept. I found the ending to be especially interesting. This was well-thought out. Nice work overall! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Our enemy is dead, the Judge hit's his Gavel
Vengeance is ours, Oh children of Babel."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was very inspiring. Nice work on this concept, and the imagery and descriptions. Good work overall! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I cannot make out the call
I cannot hear the whispers."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work.
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was a lovely poem. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. Nice work on this! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Between the infinite past and the endless future
To live for only a moment then to be dead for all eternal time."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This was very philisophical. I very much enjoyed the concept used. Nice work! ^_^
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.
Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "When the interview was over they would respond with "we will give you a call" and they never would call. Still even after the what he called "rejections" he didn't give up."
Emotion: Nice emotion
Grammar and Spelling: Nice work
Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this prologue! I found this to be very interesting and the novel should be fascinating. I cannot wait to read it. Nice work! ^_^
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