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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "But I don't think I have to stay here much longer. You see, it's been just about a month, which means that pretty soon there will be another full moon night. And when that happens, I don't think these people will be strong enough to hold me in."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Some grammatical mistakes. Otherwise, nice work.

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was an interesting werewolf story. I must say, I do not read much about werewolves anymore, besides the obvious Twilight series. This was well-thought out. I especially found the ending to have a creepy feel to it. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Jack walked through the hall. He listened for a noise. Some mice ran in front of him, and he heard chatter. He slipped into the shadows and listened.

"Please, please "please"! Don't kill me!"

"Shuddup."

Jack clenched his fists. That bastard! Jack stomped throught the hall, and banged doors, searching for the man.

"Who's there? I've got a gun!" Jack growled.

"I know that you idiot! I'd suggest you drop it before I rip your damn throat out!" Jack heard the man gulp."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: I have seperated your sentences in the imagery category, and there were some grammatical and spelling errors. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was an interesting story, and it was well-thought out. I enjoyed the ending; mostly the last two sentences. These were my favorite sentences of the entire piece. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review of Pleading carrot  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Everything became quiet, way too quiet. And then I heard it again, a sick choir of laughter arose from the carrots followed by a terrifying "meow" As the shed and the ground that I was laying on gave way."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was well-written and I found the ending to be such a surprise. It was interesting that the main character was a cat. Nice work on this story overall! ^_^

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Review of Farewell My Child  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Tara unbuckled and hugged me. I couldn't help to think, Farewell my child, you've grown up today. My mind still fresh with the image of a baby gnawing on his next fry, while his mom and dad waited. I wondered if they realized just how long that would be?"

Emotion: Love...this was beautiful..^_^

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! I am giving you a perfect 5 for this story. By the end of this story, I was tearing. This was one of the most beautiful stories I have read yet. Thank you for writing this story, and reminding me that parents have feelings too. Nice work on this story overall, I very much enjoyed this! ^_^

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Review of My Love, My Love  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "My life ere caste to care and devotion,
my bond to ever be your dearest friend
through love wound ever as silken threads."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was so lovely. My favorite part was the last stanza. This poem was definitely a nice tribute to love. I very much enjoyed this poem and what it represents. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: A few grammatical errors. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this interactive! This interactive had an interesting concept! It reminded me of "I dream of Jeannie." Nice work! ^_^

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Review of My family  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

Emotion: Does not apply

Grammar and Spelling: DOes not apply

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed these pictures! Your family is beautiful! I wish you all love and happiness. Blessings to you all! ^_^

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Review of Green Eyes  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "She disappeared as swiftly as she came,
A green-eyed girl for whom I have no name..."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I found this poem to be well-written and well-thought out. Nice work on the ending of this poem. I was wondering who the girl with green eyes was when the poem ended ..^_^

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Review of Demons  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "My will long since destroyed
I see the distant spark
And stand within the void
While laughing from the dark."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: No punctuation used. Otherwise, nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was so beautiful. The ryhme and flow of this poem were well-done. I esepcially enjoyed the ending. Nice work! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Does not apply.

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this! This recognition was very sweet. It was nice of you to make this. Nice work! ^_^

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Review of Memories  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I'd like you to know,

That I'll never be able to forget,

And I'll always love and miss you."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem touched my heart deeply. The rhyming was a little off in some stanzas, but I found the sentiment to be so memorable. Nice work on this poem! ^_^

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Review of When Bruno Dies  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Their mom frowned in disapproval. “How could you say such a thing? Jeremy’s such a polite and helpful boy.” She looked at Gina. “Did you see this too?”

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This story was well-written. I found the ending to be interesting. Did the parents finally believe him? Nice work on this story! ^_^

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Review of For a Lifetime  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "We have a destiny waiting, and
fate has finally brought you back to me
I’ve loved you for a lifetime."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! This poem was so lovely. I found the beginning of this poem to relate to my life. When I can find poems to relate to my life, I enjoy them that much more. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review of Solemn  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: " Laying down on his bed, he traces his finger across the photo, before placing it over his heart. He closes his eyes, one last time. Eternal rest."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was beautiful. I enjoyed the ending of this story the most. I found the ending to be so sad, but it was so well-written. Nice work overall! ^_^

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Review of The Vulture  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "He jumped, throwing his arms open wide. The people were looking at the human who had rematerialized with him. Strange how he no longer thought in words, but in images."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: There were some run-on sentences and incomplete sentences. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^


Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This was well-written and well-thought out. The ending was a ncie twist. Nice work on this story overall! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this interactive! This interactive was so interesting! I found the concept to be so awesome! Nice work overall! I am giving you a perfect 5 for the concept! ^_^

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Review of A Slave's Heart  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: A few grammatical errors. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this interactive! This was an interesting interactive. I think in some aspects, we are still slave's of this world. Nice work! ^_^

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Review of Autumns' Flower  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Nana’s last years of life were nurtured by God’s blessings, and with the bold colored leaves of fall she blossomed into our autumn flower."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This story was so lovely. I had a Nana as well, and I loved her very much. I was the apple of her eye until her death when I was 5. Nice work writing this story! ^_^

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Review of Convincing  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: “Yes, and you already know how very grateful I am.”
“Well get dressed kitten, I’m just a janitor.”

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this dialogue! Nice work on this. The concept was quite amusing. Nice work on the ending! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Someday, I may regain my ability to play my guitar and sing with the full voice I remember so well. For now, however, I must reconcile my memories with my current reality."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work! ^_^

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this story! This story was so beautiful! I am so sorry that this happened to you. I wish you well on life's journey, and may life bless your life. Nice work on this story! ^_^

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Review of Worthwhile  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Wedding vows were meant to be spoken
But wedding vows weren't meant to be broken."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I am sorry that your marriage failed. You presented some very nice imagery and descriptions in this poem. Nice work! ^_^

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Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I'll continue my walk, in these same ole shoes.
Give me some encouragement
As I walk through these blues."


Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I like the alternate ending much better. This is a beautiul poem. Nice work on the concept. ^_^

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Review of Forever  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "What is forever?
Is anything forever?
Is forever a simple illusion of the mind?
Made up to make us believe that nothing will end even when an end seems only logical?"

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this poem! I have broken the sentences into stanzas for you. Nice work on the concept and overall! ^_^

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Review of Makes Ya Wonder  
Review by Lolita-New Book!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "I feel like a just a wasted space and I can't help but wonder what I'm doing here on Earth. All I can say is...Makes ya wonder what HIS plan is for you when HE makes it so hard."

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this campfire! This was a little despressing, but it was well written. You may want to break this into paragraphs to make it more readable. Otherwise, nice work! ^_^

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Review of Article Query  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions.

Imagery: Nice imagery!

Emotion: Nice emotion

Grammar and Spelling: Nice work

Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this letter!
This letter was very professional and very well-written. Nice work writing it. ^_^

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