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Review of The Dark Side  
Review by aphroditequeen
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good start, I would love to read more when you get it done. good job.
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Review of The Sad House  
Review by aphroditequeen
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wonderfull! Your poem/story kept me all the way to the end. Keep up the great work!
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Review of Beyond Soap  
Review by aphroditequeen
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, I love it! such humour! It's a great short story/joke. Man, your good, keep it up, I needed a smile today and thats what your writing has done, so thank you!-Kodie- AQ
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Review of Mary Ann  
Review by aphroditequeen
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I liked it, i wish you could continue with the story! keep up the good work.
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Review of New Beginnings  
Review by aphroditequeen
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm going though a divorce right now, some of your word spoke to me, a new book,story, vulnerable, that too is all me. it's a great poem. thank you for writing it.
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Review of Looking At You  
Review by aphroditequeen
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I can hear music to this, try to continue writing the rest, i feel like it needs more, i really like it. it could be a really great song. keep it up!
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Review of Walk with Death  
Review by aphroditequeen
Rated: E | (4.5)
i'm thinking that has something else to do with your life. I would watch just a little of the flow of words, i also have that problem. but i liked it, keep it up!
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Review of The Changeling  
Review by aphroditequeen
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
loved it. you gave just enough of the Noll"s past, to help the rest of the story. Keep going. I'd love to see this short story into a book.
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Review by aphroditequeen
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I was enjoying the beginning of the story, The mother dying, a crazy evil aunt. It's hard to get into once the story starts at the bakery, I really think you have a good play going, but i wouldn't paint the main girl as a saint right from the start. Keep going, I would still like to read more.
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