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Review of Back to school  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good crossword.
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Review of Do I?  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good poem, maybe it could be longer. More descriptive. Just a thought.
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Review of His Amazing Power  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (3.0)
Very thoughtful poem on his holiness.
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Review by becbec
Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice story, cute idea.
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Review of Not a Word Spoken  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the stanza, I like the rhymes, good flow. Unsure of last stanza. Maybe wording.
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Review by becbec
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good rhyming, I like the three line stanza.
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Review of Free Write  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very good free write. I hope you heal from your loss.
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Review of Unrequited  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nicely written. The road of fate is twisted.
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Review of Lucy and Larry  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (4.5)
Cute poem. Friendship a good thing.
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Review of The Epiphany  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (4.0)
Epiphany, the moment when we realize our lives are intertwined with the pain of life or living.
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Review by becbec
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Oh the troubles of being a woman inn a man's world. Nicely said, nice flow, nice rhyming. Enjoyed.
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Review of Rain  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice poem about love. Feelings expressed.
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Review of Poof  
Review by becbec
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I'm trying to understand exactly what the story is in reference too, but I don't. I understand the read between the lines, suspenseful. Good job there. And your right sometimes they don't care about the story.
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Review by becbec
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was a good poem. Well written for thoughts on desire.
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Review of Golden Zeta  
Review by becbec
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The characters are well done, the emotions are there, interesting story.
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Review of In-Between Time  
Review by becbec
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The reality of this poem hits home, but it is the truth.
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Review of The Wishing Well  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like love poems, this one was nice.
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Review by becbec
Rated: E | (3.0)
Short, to short, my opinion. Maybe developed it into something larger, more information on how you built it, what it looked like, more information about the beach. Just suggestions.
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Review of Tall Pine  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very pretty. I like the visuals. Enjoyed.
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Review of Not You Again...  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this story very humorous. Maybe he will learn his lesson this time. I think it was well written.
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Review by becbec
Rated: E | (3.5)
The stanzas are well done. Rhyming a bit off, not sure if you meant for that. Persistance is a very valuable lesson.
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Review of Words  
Review by becbec
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like the flow of the poem. The rhymes are well done. It says a lot about how someone really writes. Good job.
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Review by becbec
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I'm am so impressed with this story. I felt every emotion, every turn of events, every thought you had. So vivid, so real. Excellent story.
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