Another wonderful work from you Keaton Foster. Each time I check out something from you, I am surprised that once again you impress me with your talent. Do you write everyday? Hasve you many ideas yet to be explored by yourself or your readers. Keep up the great work. Keep On Writing!~ Jeff
Nicely done again Harry. Each time I read something from you I am more impressed and happy with what you wrote. Sounds like Jake and Jim are based on real people you know. Maybe not their names, but their characteristics. Keep exploring your obvious talent my friend. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Very nicely done. This poem flows along carrying the reader along for a most enjoyable ride. Strong characters and storyline. Keep exploring your talent. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep up the great work you did here and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
That you have talent is obvious to anyone who reads your work. I relaly like dwhat I read here. The storyline flows and keeps the readers wanting to continue onward. My only cocncern with this is some of the sentences have a tendonacy to run on.Other than that It was great.Keep up the great job and Keep On Writing! Jeff
A well written nicely thought out storyline. Strong characters. My only concern is the small resembelence to the tv show Bonanza I caught in a couple places. Otherwise it was enjoyable to read and I would recommend it. Keep exploring your talent. But, most of all. Keep On Writing! Jeff
A very strong well written storyline and likeable characters. You roped me in and I rode along until the very end. Great job. Keep exploring your talent and most of all. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Did you ever watch the cable series about The Cursed Gun? Every episode had different characters getting taken in from this gun. It was a fantastic show and so is this story. This is well written with strong characters. Keep exploring your talent and most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Wow very nicely done for only writing for fifteen minutes. You did a wonderful job and I was impressed. Strong characters and the storyline flows along. You made me want to read on until the end, which is what writer is supposed to do. Right? Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Once again you impressed me with your writing Cowgirl Cat. This piece explored that talent of yours more and I enjoyed this very much. There is nothing I can say against this poem. I am looking forward to following your career in writing and I admit you have made a fan out of me. Keep On Writing! Jeff
Nicely done. A well written story in the prose of a poem. It flows along carrying the reader who you've roped in at the beginning. The reader wants more and more, so they keep on reading until the very end. I look forward to more from you in the futurre. Keep on exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
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