C R Mullings. Once again you impressed me with your item #1137098, entitled Rawhide Chrnicles: Red Rock. I like this character you came up with, Rawhide Cait Cadera.I read along with anticipation to what was going to happen next. For this I am giving you four and a half stars.Keep on Writing! Jeff
C R Mullings, Very nicely done here this item#1030006 entitled Rawhide Chronicles: Mistaking Identity. It was well written with strong likeable characters and a strong storyline that flows. It carries the reader along non stop from the start until the end. You keep the readers enticed to wanting more. For this reason I am giving you four and a half stars. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Michael. I was very impressed with this effort #1540213 entitled, Pilgrimage. I have to ask? Is there any personal truth behind this story? Sounds like there might be. This has strong likeable characters and a strong storyline. Keep up the great work. I am giving you five stars for this reason. Keep on exploring your talent. Most of all, Keep On Writng! Jeff
drboris, your item here #1434548 entitled A Kansas Duel was enjoyable to read. I liked this. A few places it seemed you got a bit long winded finding your way to the duel. But, you did a good job. Strong storyline and characters.I am giving you a four star rating for a good job done. Keep on exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
J D Webb. To begin with your name sounds like a writer of westerns. I like it. This story told in the three chapters, items #636491, #638133 and finally #639771 are well written with strong charcaters that are likeable and a strong storyline that flows from beginning to end. I can easily see this published and enjoyed by many. Keep up the good work. I am awarding you an five star rating. Keep On Writing! Jeff
LKCarroll, your item here #1547417, entitled Jetson is only an opening of a novel you are working on. How is that going since you posted this on this site? You gave us a glimpse in Katy Twist's life. I take it that the character Laine Morris is the reason Katy's life will change. And not for the good. Look forward to reading more of this in the future. Keep exploring your writing talent. Keep On Writing. I am giving yoou a two star rating as there is not enough to really give the reader an idea of what is going on. Jeff.
Well done KLH. This item, #911409, entitled The Night Before Christmas. Is well written from characters based on the television series, Young Riders. Hope you are a fan as I am? The storyline keeps the reader wanting to reach the end and find out if Buck makes it or not. For this I am giving you four stars of rating. Keep On Writing! Jeff
B.J.S. you have the basis for a possiably good much longer story here, item #1573370 entitled Outlaw. Not bad effort. Needs a rewrite though I believe. Expand, Expand, Expand. Keep exploring your talent. I am giving two stars for the effort. Don't stop trying! Keep On Writing! Jeff
Well done Brian. Keep up the good work. Your item #1536359, The Cowboy, is short, sweet and to the point. Telling the life of a cowboy. Good job. For thgis reason I am giving you four stars rating. Keep on exploring your talent. But, most of all, Keep On Writing! Jeff
Very well done Cherrie. Your story here is a great concept of fence riding from the horses point of view. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! I am giving you five stars for the excellant job. Jeff
Amy, I believe this is the first I have read of your work. Nicely done on this item, #1153857 entitled Cowboy, Take Me Away. You have a well written storyline with strong and likeable characters. I could easily see this story expanded into a lifetime movie. I am giving you four stars for the well done job. Keep On Writing! Jeff
My oh my! Segue, you have the start of a fantasic Western here. The item in question is #1499397, entitled, Untitled Western. You have talent and must continue to explore this. I am giving you five stars for the great storyline and characters started here. Keep up the good job and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Richard. Very well done here this item, #1526021, entitled From Prison To Prison. Nice twist in the middle of this storyline. Well defined and strong characters. I liked this for those reasones and are giving you a four and a half star rating. Keep up the good work and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Denimguy. Wow comes to mind first off after reading your item, #1643034, entitled Aces and Eights. Not long ,but you get right to the point of the story. Which is strong, with well defined characters. Good job. Hickok has been a favorite Western chracter of mine.Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! I am awarding you five stars for the great job. Jeff
Are you Jason Reilly or Randal Smith? Perhaps both. This story is a good one of strong storylinr and characters. Well written. Keep up theg ood job and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Handsome hunk. This item of yours, #1651339, entitled Bushwhacked In Casitas Springs is a good storyline Randy. It has strong characters and settings. Can I ask though? Is this piece a film manuscript? It reads like one. I really liked this story. It could be expanded into book length. If that is what you eventually wanted? I am rating this foour and a half stars. Keep up teh good work and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Phil, very nicely done here, item #1657800 entitled Gunfighter Song. I can see this piece being played up on a stage and hooking the listeners to ride along. Well done and for that I am giving you four stars. Good job. Keep on Writing! Jeff
BScholl, this item # 1661264, entitled A Shot Of Luck is a good story and I was impressed the way this flowed.Though a little short in my opion, I would have liked to see more of these two characters. Both are strong and likeable.Especially Sheriff Kincaid. I am giving you a four and a half star rating for the wonderful job you done. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
M. S. Barnes, your item here # 1248241, entitled Short Story: About Emma Fay. Was a well written story about a little girl giving an important job by her Father and I found the characters strong and likeable. The storyline flows well and keeps you wanting to read onward. For this reasone I am giving you a four star rating. Keep exploring your talent and keep On Writing! Jeff
D. K. Moon, this item # 1673010,entitled Cowpoke's Lament, touched me more than I thought it would. It was well written. The two characters are both strong and likeable. You made the reader feel as if we were right there, setting with them listening to the old cowppoke as he told his life story and last wishes. For this good job I am giving you a four and a half star rating. Keep exploring your talent and Keep On Writing! Jeff
Edward Manley,your item here, #1686724 entitled Shoot-Out at the Ignorance Saloon was surprisenly good. There was a lot of technical terms that hopefully the normal reader will understand. That would be the only thing I found wrong with this. That is why I am only giving four stars of rating.The characters are strong and believeable. Good storyline. Keep exploring your talent. Keep on writing! Jeff
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