*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/canary
Review Requests: OFF
16 Public Reviews Given
47 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review by Canary
Rated: E | (3.5)
Lots of hope in this words!
2
2
Review of I Wait in Silence  
Review by Canary
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well written! Thanks! :)
3
3
Review of Longing for you  
Review by Canary
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
beautiful :)
4
4
Review of Death Peddlers  
Review by Canary
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hhahaha! very nice and funny...
Loved reading! :)
5
5
Review by Canary
Rated: E | (4.0)
I din't understand the essence of the poem....
but enjoyed reading nonetheless..
6
6
Review by Canary
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice read :)
7
7
Review of Invisible  
Review by Canary
Rated: E | (3.5)
People do care, but they fail to show it..
8
8
Review of Djinni  
Review by Canary
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
very touching...
A good read :)
9
9
Review of The Gods' Game  
Review by Canary
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow! this is a good read! :)
10
10
Review by Canary
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Very touching! :)
Keep writing!
11
11
Review by Canary
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
good work! daunting... :)
12
12
Review of Reyes  
Review by Canary
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Nice story...

Maybe you can look at breaking it into paragraphs for the ease of readers?

Anyhow, keep writing :)
12 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/canary