I would like to join your group.I'm a greenhorn but I love to read and review poetry. I believe I can give a review that will not only bring a good feeling to the writer but it will be from the heart. I hope you can put your trust in me enough to make me a member.
Loved the story. I love reading funny stories like this and this was a good one. Very well told. Held my attention from beginning to end. There didn't seem to be any kind of mistakes. If anyone suggests any changes it would surprise me. Look forward to more stories.
I loved Dr. Seuce Books. As a kid, I loved reading them to my kids. Now my kids are reading them to their kids. Dr. Seuse will be around for a while I think. You really know your stuff about Dr. Seuce. I love the old cartoons he did during World War II. Private Snafu. They were really funny. This was some fun reading and good questions.
Once upon a time, there was a there was a Jack Ass named Woody. Everyday Woody pulled a plow for the farmer to plow the fields. One day Woody up and disappeared. Because of that, the farmer had to borrow his neighbor's tractor. He enjoyed using the tractor because he didnt have to walk behind Woody and work that un pleasant plow. Until finally the farmer turned woody out to pasture. bought him a tractor and they both lived happily ever after. Moral of the story: Dont work your ass off or, There's nothing wrong with sitting on your ass.
First Off: The love game is a tough one. This coming from a guy who was engaged 5 times. This is pretty much a rant from beginning to end. Correct me if I'm wrong but, you seem to show a lot of anger here.
Secondly: I thought the poem was good. It seemed easy to read with few flaws.
I am not qualified to review such a beautiful, patriotic poem as this one. I have read many poems since I have been here but this is the best one that I have read yet. You are indeed a gifted poet. This poem speaks patriotism from beginning to end. I have always been very patriotic because I've had so many family members in the service and now my oldest daughter's husband is in the Army and has been sent over twice so far. So thank you so much for your patriotism.
First off: The title is an attention getter. We all love and cherish our mothers. I am so sorry for your loss. It sounds like you have very fond memories.
Secondly: The whole poem in all was beautifully written. I was so into the poem itself, I did not notice any mistakes if there were any.
I see someone is a Harry Potter fan. They are some good movies. My daughter and her husband are both Harry Potter fans. Anyway, very good poem. Those were good scenes where the letter's come flying through from everywhere. If I recall the rest of the family was trying to stop them.
Keep writing
Thanks
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