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Review of Please Choose Me  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Delightful story. Your characterization of Jeremy was perfect. I immediately found myself in favor of, and championing, his adoption. Very well written. My natural curiousity wants to know how the meeting turned out. Great job. Jewel
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Review of My Love For You  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautifully written love poem. I love how you show the wall of resistance coming down replaced with full surrender to love, despite painful past relationships. Great job. Jewel
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Great story. You drew me into the tale from the very beginning. Wonderful imagery - with a build up to the end. I enjoyed it very much. Jewel
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Review of Dream Catcher.  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This poem is powerfully written. Your descriptions allow the reader to enter your pain and sadness. I love how your dreamcatcher is a symbol of hope - giving you the ability to dream happy things that evade you when you are awake. Nicely done. Jewel
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Review of Mighty Whispafoke  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this whimsical poem. It was really fun to read. Great job. Jewel
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is one of those poems that make you sigh happily when you are finished. There seems to be so much striving as we go through each season of our lives. Your poetry brings contentment and peace as the readers enjoys each line. Thank you for sharing a bit of yourself and giving us a peek into your heart. Beautifully written. Jewel
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Review of The Lost Love  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really loved this poem especially the following part:

A whirlwind; indeed the rapture
to engulf all consciousness.
In that gaze I was captured.
He was propitious-less

I love your use of words and the way your writing flows from line to line.

Beautifully written - it reminded me of a whirlwind romance a few years ago, that ended in disaster. Great job. Jewel
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Review of Healing Hands  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderfully written poem. We need to pay tribute to the noble profession of nursing and you did this perfectly. Great job.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a powerful poem, well written with an insightful message. Jewel
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Review of Love Me  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is beautifully written and contains so many nuggets of wisdom. My favorite part is...

"Love the lessons that are the beautiful aches in life.
Love thy neighbor, love thy friends and thy wife.
Love the people who cause you bitter strife.

Love the path, whether narrow or thin,
Love the places it has placed you in.
Love the loss, in the future you'll win."

It's easy to love the lovable and to be happy when things are going great. It is much harder to appreciate the hard times and love people that are not loving toward us.

Great job. Keep on writing. Pam
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful group of very accomplished writers. Thank you Dave for inviting me to join. Jewel
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Review of The Whittler  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a wonderful philosophical poem. Well written - It held me from the beginning to the end and guided me into deep contemplation. Thank you for this wonderful delight. Jewel
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Utterly delightful and wonderfully fanciful. I find myself wanting to join them in their mystical wonderland. Beautifully expressed. You definitely have the soul of a great poet. Jewel
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was a wonderful story, with a delightfully wicked plot. I enjoyed every word. You are an extremely talented writer. Jewel
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Review of STICKY NOTES.  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Unlike some movie sequels that do not stand up to the original - this poem was equally delightful. Thank you for my chuckle this morning - sets the tone of the day. Continued great writing. Jewel
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Review of CHERISH  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent - masterpiece - What a wonderful description of the stages of a young person's life and how they relate to family. Your writing is fluent and descriptive. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Jewel
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Boy, do I identify. Great poem - entertaining and very well written. Jewel
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Review of Easter Update  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a uniquely contemporary way to tell the Easter Story. Sometimes as Christians, we tend to read it in the Bible and year after year, it becomes almost sing-song. This brought the message alive. Well done.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank you for giving me a beautifully written description of a country that I have always wanted to visit. Your writing flowed so easily that the borrowed poetry stanza blended in as if it truly belonged to the masterpiece. This would be a marvelous marketing piece for enticing someone to your country. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Cold  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm totally with you. It has been a long and very cold winter in Maine. This poem was well written with deep feeling. Keep writing and sharing. Jewel
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Review of Garden Thoughts  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very unique approach to the Easter Story. I loved how you conveyed the struggle that Jesus had in the Garden of Gethsemene. After all, part of Him was human. I loved the last stanza, where He surrendered His will to His Father, so mankind could be redeemed. Beautifully written. Jewel
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Review of Children  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love poems that capture the essence of childhood and you have done a wonderful job at that. Beautifully written. I love being with children because it gives me an excuse to enter their delightful worlds. Keep writing and sharing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a perfectly whimsical poem. Delightful. By the way, that's what I'd do. Jewel
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Your poem was delightful. I can see the playful antics now. I remember so many fun times wrestling with our kids. Now we can do it with our grandkids.
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Review of A Love Sublime  
Rated: E | (5.0)
There are no words to adequately review this poem. But, I'll try. Bravo, Wow, Awesome! You have moved me to tears. There is so much power demonstrated in each line - you have portrayed the sacrifice Christ made for us so brilliantly. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. You have truly pointed my heart to my Savior for this beginning to Easter Week. Thank you from the depths of my soul.
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