This is a great poll to see if we are being honest with ourselves, and our abilities. Choosing this site has given me so much enjoyment. I've found kind, straight forward input to assist me in my qwest to become a published author. I find a great deal of joy in reading, and as I have stated to others, this is a marvelous learning tool. I get to read new works, give opinions, as well as the opportunity to meet like minds.
I have found myself to be "hooked" on this site. There are so many good people who take time out of their busy schedules, to joyfully give us a helping hand in our quest to become published writers. Each and everyone gives us honest encouragement, along with gentle correction. It is as if I have a "new good neighbor" I am pleased with how everything is presented. My experiences with other writers, have been nothing but positive.
You have a great flair with language. I appreciate the way that you gave many a "voice", for there are numerous families such as my own, that don't hug much. Your lovely missive said exactly what we wish to say, but don't have the courage to speak the actual words, "I Love You". Keep the words coming.
This is written with a deep abiding belief in a higher being. It is vivid, thought provoking, and lends us a fantastic tip for our health. Worry never solved a thing; only creates disorder. It is also telling us that We shall be judged by our actions. I really enjoyed this.
I like this for it's raw, honest, childlike wonder. I see one who has been abused, with distrust for the persons who are supposed to protect us. The writer exudes emotions that many of us are afraid to address, and keep hidden in our hearts forever. One prime factor that I found interesting, is the fact that "blame is placed on self". A clear sign of abuse. This is a simple, yet powerful work.
This work speaks volumes, with a lot of unspoken love. It is short, concise, and filled with heartfelt longing, for "that special love. I found myself reading it three times to allow the full picture to sink into my cranium. I can relate to this author.
I am very pleased with what I see each time I log on. You sincerely place much of yourself into making the dite interesting; which draws the reader back into your realm. This area, shows me that much work is placed into making the port more interesting, as well as a marvelous writing tool.
This is cute, but I found that the use of the different colors, had the tendency to through me off from the whole meaning of the work. I am one who would like to enter the world of the writer. Distractions took away from the piece.
You have a flair for the desciptive word. Please continue to grace us with your inner thoughts.
No need to try to make each word rhyme. Writer started off wrong, by belittling their precious thoughts. If this is what you believe for yourself, why would I want spend time in such a realm?. Remember, we are who we profess to be. Believe in yourself, have faith, determination and continue to let the words flow. Keep writing.
This work , though brief, speaks volumes beneath the surface. I see a dedicated soldier, committed to fulfilling his mission. The verbage is quite descriptive, so much so, that you can actually hear the bombs, see the dust, and feel the adrenalin of preparing to face the "faceless" enemy. As a member of a solid military family, who married an Army Vet, this piece struck home.
Please continue to grace us with your inner thoughts, as writing is also a great stress buster.
This is a lovely work. I enjoyed riding the cloud of emotion that flew from your words. I found it good to know that you too realize that everything created has feelings. Keep the excellent quality flowing. You are a very sensitive soul, and you show that you wear your heart on your sleeve; by your prose.
Never give up "the fight".
The opening did not grab me. I was left wondering as to the characters, and their intent.What went on a week after the priest's visit? Who, why, and when did the deaths occur?
Continue to allow the words to flow.
I love this piece of work. It describes some of the homeless that I've seen throughout the years. Many felt that I was stupid to give "a bum" a hug, shake a hand, or go into my purse, and give freely. Thank you for speaking of the voiceless. Folk tend to see people like Benny as totally invisible. As I've told many, "Don't be so quick to judge, for many of us, are ONLY a paycheck away", from being the Benny of tommorrow. Excellent Job.
Your words give hope, where so many have dropprd between the cracks of our busy bureaucracy. As one who battles Multiple Sclerosis, and a laundray list of other ills, in you I found someone who's able to tell my story, without my personal imput.
Pleas don't stop the flow.
I like this style, which I find to be sweetly unique. As one who has had "across the ocean romance", it spoke very hauntingly to me. The words of love reminds me of "The Songs of Solomon".
Keep up the GREAT work.
Great job!! My sentiments exactly my friend. Keep those thought waves charged, and continue to express your inner soul through the magical use of language.
I too share your "special pain" of no longer having an earthly mother. Not to fret, THE MOST HIGH has a very special place in his heart for "orphans" such as ourselves. You are very wise to KNOW that MA will always be right beside us as usual.
Keep writing dear one. There couldn't be a better form of comfort. Continue to place yourself in venues such as this.
I am so excited about this "new found site" Being the shy person, I found comfort in writing. This place of peace is indeed a blessing to my spirit. It's great to obtain HONEST opinions, and tips to fulfill my dream of becoming a published Griot.
May you be continually blessed with success in your life works.
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