At first, this story seemed cheesy, but reading on... I found it to be a very touching story...a story eerily close to my heart. Everything was beautifully described toward the end... it brought tears to my eyes. It almost exactly describes something I've been through. It was raw. I love it. Keep writing, my friend.
This was absolutely beautiful. The rhyming was perfect. It flowed so naturally. It nearly brought a tear to my eye. The simplicity is really what makes it stand out. You are very very talented.
Maybe...it's just because I'm pregnant and hormonal...but this poem made me burst into tears. In all honesty I was almost afraid to read this just from the title and the description. You have an amazing talent for bringing a lot of emotion to someone. The rhyme scheme was nice, the words were so simple...but they have so much power. I would really appreciate it if you would reveiw some of my work. You are a very talented writer and I would like your imput.
This nearly brought tears to my eyes. This was so raw, so honest, so beautifully expressed. I love that you didn't overcomplicate things...it was so open. I was a little confused where it said "what size to" perhaps just an incomplete sentence? Still, it didn't take away from the poem's integrity. I'm writing a peice about emotional abuse...and would appreciate it if you'd reveiw it because you seem to have a deep understanding of the hurt and confusion that comes along with it. Thanks for posting.
I LOVE your word choice. Your writing is VERY unique and beautifully written. It could be interpreted a number of ways which is great because it has something different to bring to every reader. Well done.
A very honest look at what people expect from relationships. I like that it seems raw and fresh. Perhaps, the syntax is a little off...but a very good read nonetheless.
Strong and beautiful. This has perfect ryhming and sounds very pretty. I would apprecitate it so much if someone with your talent would review my work, thanks. :)
Absolutely wonderful. Very nice ending!!! I really like this and would appreciate it if you reviewed my portfolio, I'd like to hear what you have to say. I would respect your opinion...this is great!
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