Cutting seems to be everywhere you turn. I know that you had a right to do what you wanted but cutting yourself is not one of the things that one would do under normal circumstances. You see you made me a believer and it is with your words that I believed everything you said. Keep writing.
Although I love the way you wrote this there are some errors found inthe piece. The word with is just spelled that way not the other way around. The word cues could stand for cause. I hope that you will edit the piece and I will change the rating on it. It was a good reading and don't get me wrong on that note. You did a great job with what you did. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL This piecei is beautiful and so good. One needs ot clear their head of the troubles that they encounter in a days time. You do this by walking . Iti is a great exercise and does help the smallest to the largest of humans. I think you hit the nail on the head to speak well of what you do. Keep writing.
GREAT PIECE IS THIS ONE! It is saying aboutthe work of a seamstress and what she does in making things for people. Dresses and habits for the nuns and the mothers all come to see her. She is known to sip something stronger than coffee or tea but then when it is the brides then it is the coffee or tea that she will sip . Keep writing. You did this well.
A great fall picture is this one. How true it is that the hues have their own glory when it is time for the leaves to shed their colors and for the season ot make way for Fall. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for theher are no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL This piece is a beautiful piece of work. You are first of all speaking about yourself. Then your mind is caught upon the dress in the shop. it is a pretty one as you said but the public doesn't want it then it begins to fade. The buttons that are shiny tend to fall off the dress. You made a beautifiul picture here with the words you used Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL! This is a beautiful piece of work. There are so many things to enjoy about spring time. There are the softball games that are played and the other t hings that matter to us. I liked what you had to say about the bees saying about winter. However, there are only three seasons and winter will be back again. It is my favorite time of y ear. Anyway gettting back to spring time you did a great piece with this and hope that you are proud of it. Keep writng.
Yes, it is mighty sad to see that the final day was a day that will live on in a person's life. It is great that you have a son now yourself and that you would never leave him alone. The anger is not there any longer as you said butr it is still wished that the bottle of pills hadnt' come into the picture. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You id a good job and it shows how well you did. Keep writing.
What an harrendous day that this was, So many things happened and it was a big missall the way around. The march was hardly to be the funeral march. But i guess all in all it was the right music for the whole affair.l would have hated to be in a party like this. Yuo did well in prsenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and It shows howwell you did there were no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
This is a good piece of work. You spelled out everything that there was to see It is a horror for the person to not see the night and the day light. You hit the nail on the head so to speak. Your words painted a picture that one was able to see and you used your colors well. Keep writing.
It seems that the man is not a man at all. He doesnt' feel love for anyone but himself. He has never experienced love in the way that love was intended. You have hit the nail on the head so to speak. and it is a wake up for the man to know that you are right when you walk away from him where will he be left then. Keep writing.
I think that you are right when you say that I want a male angel. I would love ot have someone lift me up and take me to Heaven. A female angel may not be that strong. I loved your analogy of the whole piece. It was something very interesting and good to read. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
This was an awful long piece of work. But you got the message across of a rape that happened. Thirteen ways to a rape is something else that I had never thought of . You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors on the page. Your work was well done. Keep writing.
BEAUTIFUL! This piece was a beautiful piece of work. It was a good reading and one that I am glad that I clicked. You did well in presenting this piece of lterature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it is without errors It is hoped that you will keep on writing. You're good at it.
It is strange when death takes its toll on a person. Being a young girl is it hard to deal with about your brother being gone? I am sure it is a hard thing for you to have to deal with. I liked how you made it seem you were a hurricane out here in the world. You did everything so well. You had no errors on the page and it was a good reading. I am glad that I clicked it. Keep writing.
Sounds as if you are into cutting yourself. With paper cuts it is still the same You have a long piece here and one I am glad that i clicked. My dughter has the problem of cutting herself at times too. But she hasn't done it anymore. I am so proud of her for that. you have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
This was a good reading. You spoke of many things that you thought of. You were being chased and you ran away. But he found you and took you away with him. This is what i got from the reading and hope that I am right about it. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and there were no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
Your first attempt at writing poetry is an astounding success. You did everything well in making this up and it was a good reading. I didn't see any mistakes foudn on the page. You did well in presentingthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Keep writing.
There are many things that come to mind when reading this piece. You are looking at yourself in the mirror and discovering that your eyes are not blue. That the whole poem is centered around you and only you. It is something for sure enough and a good piece that was good reading. Keep writing.
This poem is about yourself in the character's position. There are no errors found on the page and you did great in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did there are no errors on the page. We said that already but it was for emphassis. Good job. Keep writing.
The piece was a good read. Though I did have trouble in knowing what you said .It was as if you were talking about a garage floor at the ending and I was able to follow that but prior to everything is bleek. you did a good job of writing this piece for there were no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
Thank you for taking us on a run of the game of chess. It is a game that I never learned to play though my brother would have loved it. The descriptions were there to light the way for me ot see what you were talking about. I enjoyed the reading of this piece though and want ot say that the presentation of the piece for the purpose of a review was right on. Keep writing.
Yes with the proper time you will see your dad again. Preparations have to be in order for that to happen though. One makes a decision for Christ here on the earth. it is with that prearation that things happen to the soul who is ready to leave tihs world. You8 have done well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. YOu did a good job and it shows how well you did .There are no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
WOW! What a piece this is! You have had me fromthe beginning to the very ending of this piece. It is ass if she is in her own world there is no turning her back upon. You did well in presetnting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors on the page. Please keep writing.
This was a great piece of work. You spelled everything the way it was to be spelled with the exception of imperfect world. This is the thing I saw that attracteed me to the piece and was let down somewhat for the word being mispelled. I realize that there are many countries that are on WDC. I am just used to the English part and nothing else. If you spelled the word the usually do then it is correct. Keep writing.
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