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Review of Notice Me  
In affiliation with The Art Shop  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thought this was a very well written poem. It was enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work and keep on writing. Joe Henley Sr.
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In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Right off the bat I got a good visual on this one. It was also very well written and flowed nicely. You done a very good job of staying on topic and everything seemed to work together on this one. The only thing I would liked to see changed would be the format being more comformative! Overall very good job though, keep up the good work. Joe H.
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Review of Separation  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Overall i think was was a good piece. It was well written and The title reflected the content. I got a sense of your emotion on this was and to me that is the whole point of Poetry. I am not sure if you made a typo on the second to last stanza but personally I think it should be "Then it sputters out" but thats just my opinion. Everything else is great. Wonderful job and keep up the good work. Joe H.
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Review of This is My Cry  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I simply loved the poem as well as the video. Great job on this one, you hit the nail right on the head. Everything about this one just worked for me. Great vision on the video as well. The rhyme flowed well and was on time and I really felt the spirit of the poem. Keep up the good work and keep writing. Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was a very heartfelt poem. I enjoyed reading this one! My only suggestions is to break the lines up some. I see the rhyme pattern you were using and it would flow better if you broke it up and maybe ommited a word or two so the flow was better. Overall that is my only suggestion, I think it is a great poem that dosent need alot done.You done a very good job on this, I gave you a 4.0 because this is a free verse poem and you really cany go wrong on the format on those. Very good job once again!
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Review of The Eagle  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I loved it, this was a pleasure to read! You done a great job in the fluidity on this one, it was seemless. I gave you a 4.5 on this one because the first stanza was six lines and the duration was 4 lines. I guess personally I would have liked to seen a consistent pattern. With that being said I think this is a very, very good poem. This should be published somewhere. Very good job and keep up the good work. Joe J. Henley Sr.
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Review of Your Body  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This one was a decent poem, I enjoyed reading it. To be honest I would have like to see the endings in this one rhyme a little better but that was the only thing that caught my attention. Good job on this one and keep up the good work. Joe H.
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Review of Nine Years Old  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful, just a wonderful Poem to read. It was heart felt and very enjoyable to read (although it made me a little sad, lol). All the stanzas flowed together perfectly in this one. In my opinion dont change a thing, you really did your daughter justice! Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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Review of Sixth look  
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This one has a good concept behind it , but some of the lines like "dirt smell of virgin" kinda threw it off a bit for me. This still has a lot of potential. I just think a few lines need to be "smoothed out", but thats just my opinion. Overall good job though, keep up the good work. Joe H.
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Review of Huxlian Slam  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked what you were trying to accomplish with this one, I especially like the images that came to my mind when I read this one. I do however think this one would have been easier to follow if written in a different format. With that being said I think that is the only thing I didnt like about this one. Very good job on this one. I was a very good poem!
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Review of Shed No Tears  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I have to be honest, when I see the title and description I didnt think I would enjoy this one, but you done a ver good job. Very well written and an enjoyable piece for me to read. Keep up the good work. I gave you a 4.5 on this one!
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Review of Never Knew You  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very touching poem, although a little short and non descriptive. Im simple terms I didnt feel alot of emotion from this one. It is the start of something very good though. I encourage you to keep working on this one it really has potential. Keep up the good work and keep writing.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this one, it really took me back a few hundred years, lol. Very well written, and i loved the wordage you used in this one. I gave it a 4.5 because I think one or two lines were a bit bumpy but this one was almost perfect. Great Job, keep up the good work and keep writing.
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Review of Vox Dei  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I totally loved it! You hit the nail right on the head with this one. I gave you a 5.0 on this one. I loved the rhyme scheme and really made the words pop to life in this one. Glad to see this one was entered in a contest. I did not see anything that needs improving. Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest with this one. Joe H.
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Review of The King's Sons  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I gave this one a 4.0, I thought it was very well written but just a little to long for my taste. This piece was enjoyable to read though and overall I liked it. Keep up the good work.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I gave this one a 4.5, very good job on this one. I really enjoyed reading this one. Very creative poem. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Invincible  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked everything about this one except "feeling weak like I have the flu", that line just didnt seem to fit in this one. Other than that this one was perfect. Keep up the good work.
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Review of MOM  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A very touching poem, and overall well written but to be honest I think to "oh" between to mom slows it down a little. I did enjoy reading it though, very good job and please keep up the good work.
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Review of Halifax  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem. Very well written and it just shows class! Keep reppin your city! Very well done!

Joe H
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Review of "Crystal Tear"  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
4.5 from me on this one. A very enjoyable piece to read as well. Very good job on this one. It all worked great together and I loved the rhyme scheme. Keep up the good work. I look forward t reading more of your work.

Joe H.
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Review of One Last Chord  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked this one. Overall I get what you were trying to say, but without a description of the poem up front I may have been lost at points. Overall a good write though. Being a musican I really liked the concept of this, keep up the good work.

Joe H.
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Review of Easy to Assemble  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love it! 5.0 all the way. I can not say anything but GOOD things about this one. Very well written, true and something we all can relate to. Perfect! Keep up the good work.

Joe H.
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In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great job. This one flowed together very good as was a enjoyable read. Keep up the good work.
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Review of The Kiss  
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This review is from Showering Acts of Joy. Thank you for allowing me to read your poem/writing. I hope my comments are helpful. However, you are always encouraged to follow your own instincts and always KEEP WRITING!


What I liked: I liked ALL the characters in this story as well as the story itself. Very well done, I look forward to reading the rest of this, lol.


Suggestions: No suggestions on this oen but keep writing. Yes, i like sherry, I also like her friend as well. She sounds attractive, lol.


Overall opinion: Very well written. I gave you a 5.0 on this one. keep writing, I cant wait to read more.

Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

This review is from Showering Acts of Joy. Thank you for allowing me to read your poem/writing. I hope my comments are helpful. However, you are always encouraged to follow your own instincts and always KEEP WRITING!


What I liked: Very good writing, and all the lines seemed to fit in effortlessly.


Suggestions: I think so of the words used to rhymed take away from the effect, I think some of them simply do not fit, but were only being used because they rhymed.


Overall opinion: Overall a good piece of writing. I gave this one a 4.0

Joseph J. Henley Sr.
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