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Review of Isolated  
Review by kymee
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
You might want to change the rating to 18. Fourth stanza, first line, should he should be he's. The last two lines don't make sense or you could elaborate on it. Keep writing.
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Review of Smiles  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great poem. Second line omit is. This poem is very true. . No one really knows what's in one's heart
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
very true. keep writing
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Review of Bipolar  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great poem. I too am bipolar and can relate to your poem. keep up the good work
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Review of My Midnight Star  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
good poem. 2nd stanza should match the same syllable count as the other stanzas. A very caring poem. I like it
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Review of My Ghost of Past  
Review by kymee
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
good poem. should be keeps.
should be as I walk I
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Review of Your the one  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good poem.
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Review by kymee
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Nice poem. Crys should be cries. should be pain's. Kind of a sad poem. Hate will eat you alive. I am bipolar too, but I've been dealing with it for over 20 years. It does get better later in life.
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Review of destiny  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
Not a bad poem,, but needs some work on syllables in a sentence. Don't stop trying, it just takes time and experience
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Review of The Little Girl  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
great poem. the only problem I see is that second to last line she be passed not past.
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
second line should be crossed. 2nd stanza, should be traditions. this instead of these. question mark after other. quest ion mark after free. 4th stanza should be don't. capital I. This poem has potential, but needs some grammar work. keep working at it.
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice poem. Good luck on your new baby
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Review of clowns  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (1.0)
nothing to read here.
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Review of Passing  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like t his poem. Very deep meaning to you I'm sure. Keep sharing
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Review of Will You  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
The syllabie count seems to be off in the first few sentences. 2nd stanza, change we will to we'

the last two lines don't rhyme.

Sounds like a great love poem. Strong love never dies
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Review of The Tough Stuff  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
life is worth living and picking up the pieces for. This too shall come to pass.
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Review of Love  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a very sweet poem of love to your loving wife. I like it. May your marriage continue on strong until your final days
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Review of Alzheimer's  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it. I have a brother who has dementia. We're starting to see the decline in his life
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Review of Love  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great poem. I like my soul is close to tears.
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Review of A Touch Of Hope  
Review by kymee
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
need an apostrophe at women's ear. I would have liked to see this poem expanded. At least this person listened to someone (an angel) and didn't hurt herself or someone else. Good job
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Review of Lies  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
4th line from the bottom should be given. I like this poem. I can hear the anger and disgust you have for your friend along with the betrayal. Only you know what kind of relationship you two shared. We can't let someone hurt us. Good luck and keep writing
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice poem. I like it. foreword is spelled forward.
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a cute poem about your inner child. No comma after world in first sentence. We can all see our inner child, if we want to, but most of all, our inner child needs love.
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Review of The Sleepwalker  
Review by kymee
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello connieann

After reading {item:1688880I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A cute and catchy poem.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors. I don't believe the word But can start a sentence.
Second sentence, change to wouldn't.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked He thought I must be cheating, pounds only come from eating. I like the title. Who hasn't done a bit of sleepwalking in their lifetime.

RATING:4.5

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review by kymee
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello {user:Meg

After reading {item:1459393I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very unique take on the love of two people for one another. Kind of a sad poem.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. Almost made me want to cry. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed it very much.

RATING:4.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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