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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice. Would ha v e been better if it was a bit longer. You got right to the point though. Good luck
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great poem. It made me question where does one go? I ask myself that too often. You might want to check your syllables in each line. Some of then aren't quite there, but I think it's great. Good luck to you
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Review of Oh What a Life  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it. Possibly too many too busy's. very honest poem. good luck
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
A great poem about life. You might want to check your syllables.
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
Pretty basic writing. Good rhyming though
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good write. Wouldn't change anything
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Review of Puzzle Pieces  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good poem. I can relate to the pieces of you. I took have many like that. I love them, they are a part of who I am. and on and on seems out of place, just my opinion
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Review of FAILURE, A FEAR  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good write. I took live in the fear of sucess. Its a fear one can o vercome
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Review of My Regret  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
bed and say dont rhyme together. Overall good poem about love
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Review of My fear and rage  
Review by kymee
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
4th line should it be me instead of her? should badly be replaced by bad? An angry poem Best you take your anger out in a poem than to really act it out
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Review of The Death of Hope  
Review by kymee
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Alot of wishes and regrets. Good description. What kind of poem is this?
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
can not is one word. Good luck
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.5)
very informative thank you
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