Great poem. It made me question where does one go? I ask myself that too often. You might want to check your syllables in each line. Some of then aren't quite there, but I think it's great. Good luck to you
Very good poem. I can relate to the pieces of you. I took have many like that. I love them, they are a part of who I am. and on and on seems out of place, just my opinion
4th line should it be me instead of her? should badly be replaced by bad? An angry poem Best you take your anger out in a poem than to really act it out
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