A very truth related poem. I can understand and relate to this poem for I suffer with addiction. I feel this is a positive poem with a message that all addicts need to here. The truth.
good. some spelling errors line 7 should be and. 2nd line should be not not Not. I think the poem could definately use some work. Good poem to expand on.
Unfortunately your past is a sign of what the future is going to be like. I hope that you are accepting of yourself. We are not perfect. Poem was nicde
I truly believe in postive thinking although I do not use it enough in my own life. Good points here for me to remember especially when talking about people, I always do that in a negative light
I like I'm not afraid of being poor, I hold my treasures in my heart. 5th line from the bottom might consider changing no more to anymore. Interesting poem. I would have cut out the last 2 sentences of the poem and left it at dying.
A very true poem. I can relate to along of things in this poem. You will find what you're looking for. You are stronger than you think. Every day is a good day. Just look in front of you and you will see that.
Interesting poem. I like the part I didn't start a fire. Most of us haven't. We are just sparks to the fire. But we are necessary to keep the fire going and just as important.
The poem is very good. I also wrote a poem entitled Our Homeless but it wasn't as detailed as your poem is. I appreciate you writing this. It is an eye opener.
www.writing.com/authors/kymee Our Homeless check it out
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