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Review of Hurt me  
Review by kymee
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I really like this poem. I am glad that you are free. Sometimes we must go through a tremendous amount of pain to be free, but it's all worth it in the end
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Review of secrets  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
Secrets aren't good and can eat you up alive. Good topic and good work
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Review of A Confession  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
I thought the poem was good. It took me back at first as to what it all meant.

I liked the ending the word Hello. Sometimes that's all it takes to reconnect, to hear someone's voice we longed to hear.

Sometimes hello can also mean goodbye.

Keep up the good work.
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Review of Soldier's Song  
Review by kymee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello bscholl

After reading "The Cosmic Masquerade Ball" I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very special and heartfelt poem.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. A soldiers days are difficult, but you put the right words in the right places. Good imagery your portrayed here. Keep up the good work

RATING:5.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review of A Poem Of Love  
Review by kymee
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Sticktalker

After reading "A Poem Of Love" I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very simple, yet to the point poem. The ending is very about love.
SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: One extra space between hunting and dog.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. Liked your cover and the simplicity of the poem. Good meaning. Keep up the good work

RATING:4.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review of Love  
Review by kymee
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Sticktalker

After reading "Invalid Item" I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: Very unique.
SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked how the background is blurred out putting all the emphasis on the word love. Keep up the good work

RATING:4.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review of My Memories  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
Capitalize will on third stanza. Nice love poem. Some of the sentences were a little bumpy, but I liked it was a great story
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Review of Veiled  
Review by kymee
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello {user:Poppy Moss}

After reading "Veiled" I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very unique type of poem. Short, but beautiful. It is so true about aging. I am getting up their in age and I can already relate to the experience of some of what you said.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the poem a lot. A good read for anyone at any age. Keep up the good work

RATING:4.5

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review of Broken  
Review by kymee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Adrianna

After reading "Broken" I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very unique and deep poem. Understood it as it go to the end.
SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. Great imagery. Keep up the good work

RATING:5.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good. I like it
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Review of His Hand in Mine  
Review by kymee
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello {user:Color Me Connieann's

After reading {item:1539417I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very unique type of poem about not having a father.
SUGGESTIONS: Take so out of the 5th stanza and no capital letter on dad.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I The ending especially His hand held in mine

RATING:4.5

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review of Peace  
Review by kymee
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello {user:Color Me Connieann's

After reading {item:1459393I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very unique type of poem. Short, but gets the message across.
SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. Really like the imagery your portrayed here. Keep up the good work

RATING:4.5

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review by kymee
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello {user:Color Me Connieann}

After reading {item:1459393I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: I liked the poem it spoke from the heart. I'm sorry for your loss.

SUGGESTIONS: Take out had in the 7th stanza, 3rd line.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: Tears and heart don't rhyme in the 6th stanza.

WHAT I LIKED: The subject, the element of surprise and the love.

RATING:4.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review of Burning Away  
Review by kymee
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The only comment I have beside, I understand is that alive and night do not match if you're trying to do rhyme. But keep up the good job and keep writing
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Review of My Angel  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
I'm sorry for your loss. Keep writing it will help
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Review of A CHRISTMAS PAST.  
Review by kymee
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello meg

After reading {item:1357421I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very delightful, light-hearted Christmas poem. I enjoyed the innocence of it.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. I felt like I was there with them on Christmas Day. I hope I can see Christmas like that when I'm old. I would enjoy reading more of your great poetry.

RATING:4.5

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review by kymee
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello meg

After reading {item:1461184I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: An excellent poem. Made me want to cry. Just the title alone.

SUGGESTIONS: Don't have any suggestions.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: No spelling errors.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem a lot. It's really hard when one passes on and especially to cry, but crying is a cleansing of our soul and makes one feel better. This poem was AWESOME. Thanks for sharing.

RATING:5.0

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review of My Calling  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
And I hope you, the poet does very well. Keep up the good work. :)
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Review of Freedom's Key  
Review by kymee
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello {user:WhoMe???}

After reading {item:1411743I have the following comments to offer:

Note: Keep in mind that any review I provide is based solely on my opinion and is not intended to take liberty with the author's work. Please use or discard any comments or suggestions as you see fit.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: A very true poem. Caused me to think and ask questions.

SUGGESTIONS: Line 14 take out even.

PUNCTUATION/SPELLING/GRAMMAR: Line 13 can not is one word.

WHAT I LIKED:I liked the whole poem. It gave a message about freedom and obtaining and securing it. Interesting subject and great rhyming.

RATING:4.5

Thank you for sharing,
Kymee

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Review of Solitude  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good poem. A few suggestions though. Bear should be BARE then put a period after that, Take out even before care, take out always before be, take out just before me. It make the poem flow better together. Keep writing
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Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.5)
Really like this. It it is so true. :)
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Review of Dear Dad!  
Review by kymee
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really like this poem coming from a different point of view. This should be some healing for you by writing this out. Best of luck
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Review of My Mother's Hand  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
great poem. 4th line should be learned. 5th line same.
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Review of Now You're Gone  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like the ending. A very sad poem.
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Review of Acceptance  
Review by kymee
Rated: E | (4.5)
Acceptance is hard but is a step towards healing the heart and the soul. I like to the levels angels fly. Very good poem
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