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Review of Clair De Lune  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Au clair de la lune - one of the first songs that we had to translate at school, many years ago. (French to Dutch)

Your story touched me.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
That last sentence is a good one :) Enjoyed reading your poem.
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Review of The Broken Clock  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
A beauutiful Villanelle. My compliments.
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Review of The veil  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well done! I wish I could visit the beach and walk along the shore.
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Review of Odd O'blography  
for entry "Englyn Penfyr" 
Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Excellent.
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Review of Englyn Penfyr  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
It took you some time, but it sure is worth it. And your third stanza made me smile from ear to ear. Well done.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem grabbed me, as this is something we experience with my dear mother in law at the moment. Well written.
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Review of Life Never Lived  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
A different kind of fog - I love to ride trains. well done.
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Review of Fog  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well done!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
I follow a Dutch newsletter of a yarn store lady, who always writes about her cats. Your poem reminds me of one of those newsletters, well described so you can picture the cat and his adventures. Well done.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
I wonder what that would be... something naughty perhaps?
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Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A Bible is a truly blessed gift. Banjo knew it. Well done.
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Review of "Fading Summer"  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ginny comes latetly is a song - in our country sung by Albert West - A Dutch singer (more information about him here: https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Albert_West) but a very friendly man. I had the privilege to meet him once. Wish I could go to the beach though, just to see the sea. Well written!
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Review of Fading Summer  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
What is a frock?
Enjoyed reading your poem though.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow. Well written, and you are so right... things from Mars should stay on Mars :)
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Review of Calico Cat Cafe  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sadly for me I live in Europe...no visit for me to the Calico Cat Café. Well done.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
You asked for honest feedback. I really like this poem as it shows a piece of your heart at the moment that you wrote it.

Thinks to correct:
In stanza 2: everyday should be separated: every day. Makes your sentence stronger this way.
In line 4: i'm ... Capitalize the I.
In stanza 3: Cuz is street language. If you would like it the correct way it should be 'Cause...
In the last line, capitalize the I.

Keep on writing!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hope Mike would feel better after receiving the card. I like your story.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
That must have been an awesome sight. I like your story.
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Review of True Happiness  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
And you kept the job, I am sure of. :) Well written.
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Review of A Bad Gig  
Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could see them perform right in front of me. :) Well written!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
That last line - I believe all phone booths in our country vanished as well.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent story.
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Review of The Bookstore Cat  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
B reminded me of my grandmother's cat, named Goofy. A red cat. He sat under my seat one day, and when I moved my feet, he bit me in my heel. Poor cat was beaten up the stairs by my grandma. Later he escaped for 2 weeks and lost quite some weight. At the age of 18 years the cat passed away in 1990.
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