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Review of Bob's Story  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
And Bob's story is a sad one. Well written.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent.
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Review of It's Time To Go  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
A sweet poem :)
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent writing!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An interesting piece of history. Well written.
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Review of Ladybug Beach  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Precious poem. I like ladybugs.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I hope to visit England one day... :)

Well written!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.0)
From one non- native English speaker to another:

You wrote: Since then, she lost communication with his brother.

Should be: Since then, she lost communication with her brother.

Well written though!
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Review of Safeguards  
Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
WOW!I had another singer in my mind for no 4 actually. It is a snippet from Mr. and Mississippi by Johnny Sea - where he sings "She taught me not to gamble, on a petticoat".
You wrote a wonderful poem - my compliments!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I honestly feel for Indi. And the Hunter got what he deserved.
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Review of The Last Round  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Actually I think this story is sad. Hard for parents and children to love equally, but it is important to show. People are not made of stone. Well written.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Where would we be, without our imagination? Well written poem!
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Review of A Bridge Too Far  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
Makes me want to visit Tower Bridge. Enjoyed your story.
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Review of A Lot At Stake  
Review by Bianca
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Now, it makes me wonder who candidat #14 is :) Well written!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Excellent story! Loved reading it
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Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Absolutely awesome! Love it.
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Review of Distract the Dad  
Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I vividly could see Jack,Phoebe and the Story Mistress dancing. And a grumpy StoryMaster. Well written!
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Review of A Tale of Value  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written!
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Review of Driven to It  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
A cute tale - and I sure was glad that it was subtitled :) Illustrations with it, and it would work out well for a tiny picture book for kids.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Oh my! Your last remark made me giggle. Well written!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (4.5)
What happened to Bill when Velma escaped the bullet? You keep me wondering here...
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Review of Out in Smoke  
Review by Bianca
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful story!
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
One sentence comes to mind: "please don't tell me how the story ends..."

Well written.
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Review by Bianca
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Sad... really sad, as I love Dandelions. Well written.
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