Hello, Writing.Com Support, attention; Kimmer (102) . . . Maxamilium here, and as an author who as traveled that road of Qerries, I have to admite that at first this was not easy to achieve!
It took weeks of development and tedious search, either on the net or the soul, I finally came up with a querry letter that felt right, well somewhat; and as a perfectionist never satisfied, which to me is a curse?
For those like me without any real schooling and not much time to learn the whole of the system of publishing; stay well advised that it doesn't come quickly or cheaply, and for that matter alone state that perseverance is the key that unlocks doors usually shut tight!
At this time state that it was hard to find advise that really helped me in any way, and wished back then that had read your article, although now have achieved some of my goals and signed a contract some months ago with an agency in California, and as a Canadian from Quebec have to state that it working out well, although never spoke on the phone or have met in any way imaginable!
You deliver great points of view which I'm sure will illuminate quite a few new at the game, and wonder how I have made it this far without the knowledge of those mostly fortunate?
The will mind you was there beyond comparison, and after working double hard, I put together a query which I will include with this letter . . . from what you can see is somewhat naive in the sense of a Newbie?
After all said, this worked well for me! I actually made fifteen copies of the query addressed to the same amount of Agents not well known to me, and added all the extras that is usually needed, like synopsis, chapters and SASE, etc. . .
to make this story short; at the time could only afford to send out seven of the packages, which all but one was returned, most with well wishes and one with an offer, and the last no longer in service?
You see, it can be done, and if you try hard enough, and with a good story I'm sure things will work out for the best!
I am now on the verge of publishing my first novel, and determined to stick it out until there isn't one ounce of breath left in me, although the future is looking bright, and so far well received!
Thank you for the insight in this matter so fragile for some in the query of things, and now have printed this article for future reference, where I will keep in mind some of the pointers when write the next query.
Here is the query which was sent to (Harris Literary Agency), where got lucky or otherwise; keep in mind that now looking back and reading it, it seems somewhat not at all professional in many ways, although not altogether that bad . . . you may show it off if you please, or wish to use it to make a statement, I don't really mind at all!
This is the actual query sent! Note some of the mistakes so stated above in your article.
Maxamilium Tm.
Buddy McLarand
(Within the Child)
(the header (Maxamilium TM) was much lager on the printout of the letter, and in the color, blue)
Dear Mrs. Barbara J. Harris:
If I may have a moment of your time; I would like to take this opportunity to say that it is with great confidence that I seek your experience and representation for my Novel Buddy McLarand (Within the Child). Written as a thriller with approximately 150,000 words or 488 pages ready for paperback and hardcover; replete with skillful enthusiasm and suspense, this novel deals in love, hate, revenge and a mature subjects in the vein of abuse seeking the day of exposure! Although we've never met as of yet, I believe that with mutual cooperation this endeavor could very well be on its way and benefit all parties involved.
When the dead body of a young boy hangs from a stump on the edge of a ravine; the question then asked to all! Was this a prank gone wrong or something much more lascivious? Witness the trials of life that two schoolmates and lovers must forgo when accused of the crime they swear didn't commit!
Born in June on 24th, I am a writer of poems, short stories and fiction of a cultivated nature. Currently a member of Writing.com and have submitted three short stories with Glimmer Train Press for review. I am now simultaneously working on four different books of various fiction, meanwhile declaring that I have not tried or published anything as of yet, but with your aid will reach that point in due time! Included for your eyes to bare witness are 34 pages along with the Contents page to help guide you through the dynamics of this story, as it goes back and forth from the present to the past and so forth throughout... At this point in time would be more then willing to send the entire manuscript for your consideration and at this moment thank you kindly and bid you farewell as I look forward to your response.
Again, thank you very much for your time and attention!
Sincerely yours...................................
Michel Paul Emile Lebel
(note that there was no addrese or any other information included in the letter. I therefore placed all the information in a Cover Page and hoped that it would be sufficient!)
I rated your article with a 5.0 . . . thank you!
Over and out, Maxamlium, Author.
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