We all must be very grateful for each day no matter rainy, sunny or cold or hot. God gives us each day to live as we see fit. Let us all be grateful to be able to face a new day. There are those of us who cannot rise and face the days. We must pray for them. A grand poem. I really liked it. waves.
It does not matter that it is not your poem, because you have shared it and that is very important at least to this gray haired old poet who enjoyed it very much, all of it. Nice work. Good luck. waves.
This is absolute perfection and I feel the love you have here for that special person in your life, your grandfather. A very wonderful write. Keep up the fantastic writings. waves.
The emotion and the dramatics jump off and grab you in this beautiful and heart wrenching poem. I loved the way the writer used each verse to let the reader"feel" the emotion and heartache. Great piece of writing.
I truly love the style of this very beautiful and heartwarming poem. I see no major changes to be made. The poem is easy to read and the rythym is easy flowing and very fluid. I love the use but not over use of adjectives in this grand piece of poetry,
You were very young as I was to to begin writing great works. Good luck to you and may God bless you with another rewarding career in short stories as well as a long writing life. Great job.
I also watched as this beautiful short story turned from very emotional to a very desirable read. Lots of well formed sentences. A very dramatic subject done exceptionally well. Great pieceof work.I see a lot of my childhood in this great story. A beautiful way to start and end a day. Good luck my friend with your future writings.
Absolutely beautiful style and the little girl must have been you because this poem is absolutely marvelous. Thank you for sharing it and may God bless you always. waves.
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