A very, very emotional story with a good grasp of descriptive phrases. I loved the theme of this beautifully sad story. I see the authors' heart in each paragraph. The entire story is in my opinion very well done. A great job. I hope the author expands on this nice story. waves.
Although this nice story is very short, it has such an emotional content and has a lot of the authors' soul written into it. I loved the easy flowing paragraphs and the style is quite nice. The rythym is very nice. I really liked this entire story and the text is nice. Great job done. waves.
An honest write. A very nicely done piece and the author used a good descriptive paragraph. I loved the story line. The title is worth the content and vise versa. The entire story is very well done. I see nothing but an honest reading public for this nice story.
The overall length of the beautiful paragraphs is both truly exceptional and extremely well written, and the flow of each paragraph is very fluid from one into the next. I liked the rythym. The style is very well done and in grand form. The author has a great grasp for what a good story should be.
A very descriptive and "naturally" done story with "a come here and read me" way with the paragraphs that are very nicely written and they "flow" with a style all of their own. I loved the imagery in this really nicely done bit of literature. The author has a great eye.
A very, very nicely written story with a great style. A very sensitively done subject with great heart written in. I loved each and every word as it seemed to grab at my heart with its reality. I want to congratulate the author on this nice story. A job well done.
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