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Review of Member Survey  
Review by Maretta
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I am surmising that this survey would be useful to help the writers here so I can only think it would be most helpful and give us new insights.
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Review by Maretta
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can tell by your story that you will always remember Annabelle. I think we always remember our "first" animals,special song,view of the ocean,whatever. It has a special place in your heart forever.
Other things will take their places, of course,but I think the wonderful magic of life is that their is room for the precious memories. Thank you for sharing your feelings so beautifully.
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Review of How Old Are We??  
Review by Maretta
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am surprised at how many young writers there are. It makes me happy to know that and also makes me happy to know that at whatever your age your muse will not let you quit because the words we all write are from each individual mind and we all need to tell our stories in one way or another
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Review by Maretta
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very interesting story of your time alone at school.
You really take us with you on your journey, first we find you in your lonely room waiting while the floors dry.Then we hear about the feelings of your fellow students and of how you feel about them. Now we are hearng about your family and how much you miss them. I especially like the part where you are sitting with your father and his friends and when your family is singing together. You have allowed us to see into your life and walk with you on part of your journey.

I notice you have used the wrong tense in one place.
When you are speaking of the times you sing with your mom and sisters, I think it should be as you played {not play} the keyboard and as you sang together{not sing.}
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