Love the picture of ABBA. Soldiers is one of my very favorite songs by them. My father was a soldier, as was my brother. I did not make it, as I was 4F and a student at the time. If I had gone, I would not be here today...I could not shoot anyone if I had to.
I love reading words "out of context." Like A Rolling Stone by Bob Dylan. Fabulous.
A very well written pictograph, bringing all that creates the 4th to life. I can see and hear the sights and sounds which I shall always remember and ever miss. Those awesome spectacles that created and maintained my memories, as well as leading my life to where it now dwells. Thank you for the 4th.
Very well written with great adjectival nuances. The pictures your words paint are wonderful. The dandelion is one of my very favorite flowers until it does not do its dandy business anymore. The poppy is another (The Wizard Of Oz). Poor little dandelion!
Have you ever watched "Patch Adams?" I think you would enjoy it. An extremely well-written visit into the realm where unknown creatures sit, attempting to diluminate (not a real word) meanings for all those mental words we all take so very much for granted. Very enjoyable, from one who is definitely four letters shy of a word (meaning me).
Great idea! Superb adjectival words, bringing pictures close to mind. I have had such thoughts in the past, caressing all of the universe in one universal sweep. A fascinating journey when one is inclined to go on the ultimate passage. Thank you!
Absolutely. Life can be frustrating alone, more so when one who is close is in trouble. Empathy is my sword to deal, yet when that does not "do the trick," I always go to He who
has all the power. More so as my age sneaks up on me, I tend to resist doing things by myself.
A very heartfelt realistic picture of the drama which is a tornado. Horrific by nature and design, so much devastation can occur in such a short time period. They were still alive which is the major accomplishment, in the leavings which signal and determine this fantasmic occurrence.
So reminiscent of the feeling of apple pies so delicious and so warming to the days. Very well thought out from beginning to end, while the reader ingests the words which bring the pies to the forefront in thought and taste. Very well written for the child in all of us.
Beautifully written with a lot of feeling for your old maiden aunt who had a lot of feeling for the world around us as it was meant to be. This reminds me very much of my departed mother and a lady I used to know, both lovers of the right things. Very enjoyable. I will revisit your site often.
A very unique write, with very creative words and idea. These thoughts you project here so well, make room for those in my mind with pictures created from the first word to the last. One of the best I have read here to date. Please feel free to read some of mine. Thanks.
Fascinating write, educating my ever thirty mind to something unknown. The veil and reality well written, with the premise very well stated. Enjoyable from the first word.
interesting story in the macabre. Reminds me of one where a young lady's boyfriend cooks her dog to get back at her for leaving him. I do not think she knew, however, before having dinner with him. An interesting premise about skinning the cat. I bet it is hard.
Beautifully rendered with excellent word choice, leading to magnificent pictures to be formed in the mind. This is a new form to me, which I am always interested in learning, and one which I think has been demonstrated in the book I am rereading printed in 1898.
Please read some of mine, if you would.
Fascinating piece and rhyme scheme. Told me the real story which is enjoyable from start to finish. The rhyme scheme reminds me of something I might conceive or that might be one that I witnessed inside a book I am reading for the second time. Well done.
Very nicely written, bringing the two gods of our existence into full view. Your well-chosen words bring so many pictures to mind. "Swim in the stars" and "silver dusted dreams" are both original and beautifully written. All in all a beautiful presentation.
Very well written, taking all the inside to the outside from start to finish. The rhyme scheme left me a little bit confused, although the wording is masterful. Enjoyable from the outside, as well as the inside of the main character. This is so often the situation with so many.
Very well written, with me as its subject. This was my life before realizing in a flash that to go nowhere is to get nowhere. Life is to live and laugh and be happy with oneself. For if one abhors life, life abhors one. Happiness is all it is cracked up to be.
Very well written with wonderful rhyme and meter. Great illustrative wording, providing word pictures to savor. This kept me reading from the title and description through to the last word. One question: who is speaking in the last stanza? Could be many answers to that. Well done!
Very well written with a lot of imagery and feeling. If one were to interpret this as being about a human being, it is very reminiscent of what continues to happen regardless of one's life or seeming death. The statue as having feelings is very evident here. Well done.
Excellent, including all teenage responses to this little yellow beast, with uncanny wording which brings everything into the forefront of the piece. Especially good is "the now evil mirror who has betrayed her." But overall, excellently brought to fruition.
A very inclusive article concerning something I have never heard of. You included a lot of detail, as well as your response to the whole thing. What kind of book(s) do you write? While being very informative, this is also a little rough. But I am sure you know that. Enjoyable.
PTSD is a tough thing to deal with unless one has other tougher things to deal with. Or unless one is too involved with life to be concerned about it. Being one with PTSD and other tougher things to deal with, and being too concerned about being happy with life, I know.
Heartwrenching, from the pit where deepest depression resides. Having visited there, I know. Your word choice is excellent, leading my mind to so many pictures. Your progression from the first word to last is picturesque, to say the least. I enjoyed this, yet have a somber realization of from where this comes.
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