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69 Public Reviews Given
83 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Casual. More my opinion than, say, most reviewers.
I'm good at...
Finding grammar and punctuation errors.
Favorite Genres
horror, fantasy, YA.
Public Reviews
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Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: E | (2.5)
My tablet wouldn't let me do it.
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Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: E | (4.0)
cute survey.

I would personally love to see the Earth that the USS Enterprise so strongly protects and serves. I think I would of put at least "SciFi-verse" on there.

Still, it was interesting to look at.

No grammar or punctuation errors detected.

Nice Job.
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Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
The more I read, girl, the more we have in common. I collect stationery and pens of all sorts. I just love material to enhance my writing and it serves to inspire me.

I'm not only learning about reviewing from you, I need to learn how to use more WritingML in my stories and my blog. Mine is so terribly plain.

So hopefully we can learn from each other and both grow as writers.

I wish you peace and inspiration.
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Review of The Wallet  
Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: E | (4.0)
Just my opinions...
I think if you switched the first and second paragraphs it would read smoother.

I love how it comes round from her friend, Debbie, to the waitress at the restaurant. That is so sweet. The way the waitress says "I've got you covered" sounds like one of those unsaid vows between best friends.

An enjoyable read!
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Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice and eye appealing.

One little mistake. "P!US" should be "PLUS" under the objective.

Love the colors.

Instructions are clear and concise.

I look forward to seeing the entries.
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Review of Shadows Potpourri  
Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: E | (4.0)
aww, i had such a good prompt in mind right now...*Laugh*


this is a very good explanation. it is clear and fun to read.

no grammar or punctuation mistakes detected.
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Review by Khola Mousethyme
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Just learned of this group and I was definitely excited to become a part of it.

Everything is clear and consistent. Easy to understand and follow.

Bravo
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is very helpful and should be available in other places to help one decide if they want to do an In&Out at all.

Very nice and well worded in an easy style to understand.
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Review of INTO THE VOID  
Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a moving and thought provoking poem.

The last stanza feels a little forced.

A very good effort.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: E | (5.0)
plain language that is easy to read and understand. Directions to finding more information.

all in all a great piece that fufills its purpose of helping members understand more of writing.com.
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Review of greeting messages  
Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautiful c-note collection! A variety of messages and designs.

All in all a wonderful shop.
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Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is one of the funnest forums I have ever participated in. I almost can't wait for next year....

This has been very educational to participate in. I feel mostly ready for NaNoWriMo thanks to all the wonderful people who help make this a true success for everyone involved.

Congratulations on a super event!!!

Blessed Be
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Review by Khola Mousethyme
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I love them. They made me laugh. I especially like "sneaky little devil" one. It is true, creativity may mean being sneaky once in a while.

Bravo on a great collection.

Blessed Be.
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