I have come across this poem of yours through a random read. I loved how your expressed all the life's doubts in such perfect rhyme and rhythm. I live in Singapore and I am glad you had the chance to the various places you wanted go(:
My favorite line from this poem was, "Was my ticket with tears or laughter bought?" Something that triggered my thoughts and made me think about.
I love your writing! Thank you for such a wonderful read!(:
Just like the wonderful you, your poem "Dear Love" was beautiful! I absolutely loved the way you made your knight express his love in an unique way. Before I reviewed your poem, I just finished watching Enchanted. I felt like this poem was perfect continuation to that movie.
I believe each poem is a complete universe, and must be judged on its own terms. I felt as if I went through a gateway into another world. Dived in, and enjoyed the great piece of art!
My favorite lines: "Wings like a dragon, the one I have slain" and "For I need your litanies to endure the grave"
Tone : The tone of this poem was very passionate and very affectionate. There were sadness hidden in between the lines but it complimented the poem well in a positive way.
Grammar : I have not found any errors with grammars or any other technical errors.
Rhymes/meters : The meter of this poem followed abab consistently. I actually realized that after the second read as I was too captivated to the content of the poem. It felt like more like a song to me sung to his beloved. I just felt the whole piece flowed very smoothly. The rhymes definitely did not felt forced!:D
Conclusion: For some reason, I felt this poem brought me back to the past, in some forgotten land where there is actually something called fantasy and it is for real. I really loved the choice of words here. It did justice to the whole poem.
Thank you so much for the lovely read! I enjoyed it immensely(: I really am glad I read this before I head to slumber land!
Hope you are enjoying your stay in WDC. I am glad I have read your work. This poem was a nice read! I enjoyed it. Since, fog is always there in this life now and then, it is very easy to relate to these words expressed. Keep on writing! I will keep on reading(:
Hello once again! I read this beautiful poem of yours and totaly loved it♥ I love your strong imagery here! I felt that I was that someone on the bridge with feeling all sorts of emotions. You really know how to involve your reader into a divine experience through words!(:
My favourite stanza was,"So I pass bridges, with smiles and frowns, a few tears,
then tell my friends; " nothing is wrong."
I believe they are bridges, with wishes.
The place where dreams are born and die."
I just love your love poems. Different insights to the different phases and situations in a love story.
You just managed to capture them all and did jusice to such divine emotions which is felt by many lovers out there.
Your poem was very easy to understand. The flow was so smooth and the imagery were very vivid.
Excellent job!♥
What I loved most about this poem is that you still let hope take its chances at the end.
It was not all depressing but indeed very heartfelt♥ *thumbs up*
I could really relate to this one. You make your reader feel they are involved in this situation.
I loved this poem!(: Though you ask for no ratings,mine will be a full ★★★★★ :)
Another well written poem!(: I immensely enjoyed this too! Indeed,fools we are in so many aspects of this funny thing we call love.
I kove the choice of words for this poem. It made me more intrigued and made me just want to read more.
You are an awesome poet!♥
Do write on! I will defintely read on!
I loved this short story of yours. I was secretly hoping it was one of the introduction of a novel or something?
It really got me stuck to read it till the last word(: I also loved the way you described the small details of nature and the general ambiance of the surrounding!
Do keep writing more! I am looking forward to more of your work(:
I really really, immensely loved this piece of yours. It was pretty dark with the agony that was entwined in each and every word.
I would have loved it more if you would have made a it longer, adding along more details of the pain you experienced. I loved the details of this work.
(Maybe I am suggesting that because I wanted to read more of it and coming to an end made me desperate for more of this poetry.)
Regarding to the content, I can relate to this perfectly. I think everyone can at one point of their life or another. There is a say about, "Coming to this earth alone, and leaving it alone." Its an individual battle and sadly enough, no one really does care about you accept for the one above.
As harsh as reality is, at least we have words to portray such tragedy and release a bit of the bitter truth.
Keep writing on!(: Looking forward to more of your work!
Cheers,
Immortal
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